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Thanks Owen. I don’t know but if you hear red shoes, mhh it’s a very special song if you listen to it, so I guess it’s more about the composition
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@HummerWisdom na, it’s all good. You have your style I have mine. The image you used is not bad, but my main point in this piece lies somewhere else. But that doesn’t mean that you are not free of saying your opinion. There is just one thing I don’t…
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The lyrics are good, but I love the way you put it into music. Sounds a bit „experimental“ and I like it. Much better than all the mainstream stuff.
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Unforgiving love
No I don’t want it anymore
But it seems to be all over
It hurts to see them being in love
To see them walking hand in hand
Bitterness rises deep inside
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@HummerWisdom lol! But I also met Americans using my structure on here at the forum. So it’s not that unknown. Anyway I rewrote and I’d appreciate if you and @RainyDayMan have a look once again.
I wanted to keep the lines at the beginning but… -
Hey you guys, thanks for your ideas.
Owen you are right about this river rhyme I could find a one that fits, so I’m going to recreate the first A. Same goes for the fire line. I had two there together following one another but I thought it wou… -
Merry Christmas to all of you!
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That reads good, but painful. I hope you DO have a merry Christmas sid! Feel love and faith when the light comes back.
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Thank you @Hardtwistmusic maybe we can work together. I’m not into this music-tech but why not giving it a try.
@RainyDayMan you are very good Owen! It is a song about Berlin. Went there with the choir(on songbirds wings) and had a few great … -
Seems like a zero mhh… lol
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Mhhh… how do I write…
Good question!
I usually compare it to „giving birth“ cause I’m often very tired when I’ve finished.
There are different ways. The first is the one I like best, when it comes to me without I have to „wor… -
@RainyDayMan @sidshovel
I‘m sorry but, as Owen knows, I got some troubles with posting yesterday. I tried it again and again…when it finally worked I was just happy and skipped my usual „intro“ part with some explanations. -
@RainyDayMan there you go:
https://www.duisburg.de/tourismus/stadt_erleben/highlights/rheinorange.php
This will answer most of your questions.
Infact it is a personal one while it describes a place here in my area. But this place… -
https://youtu.be/lKqdEjvnH04?si=ujQB7HEup6AngqMI
https://youtu.be/sdf-O0MBSeI?si=XBsGQYGgalkPIkgM
Michael Patrick Kelly former frontman of the Kelly family. „Higher love“ is a song I hear in my dreams, too. -
It’s kinda funny …. During my history studies at university we got exactly this Szenario. I think it was called: conquest of Mexico out of Aztec and Spanish perspective. We got an old Aztec source as well as the diary of Cortes and his men to read a…
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@icystorm the Kelly Family or kellys as we usually call them are europes #1 family band with top hits all over Europe, South Africa and china.
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Ok guys, here is my list:
A live piece from my fave band (video taken at a concert where I worked…)
https://youtu.be/0YRLL8XfRGA?si=MTXxxRikrCSBTL5F
One of my favorite female singers…and to me one of the best of a… -
@RainyDayMan many of these German covers are from the old days, without a World Wide Web and when English has been „exotic“ and not as Common as it’s today. And the newer ones …well I guess they are good stuff that needed to be sampled or covered in…
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Well there still is Rammstein as a famous band and I guess Nena and her 99red Ballons (99 Luftballons) is still famous too.
And from Austria we got a damn good songwriter, who passed away a couple of years ago. This guy always wanted to marry… -
@sidshovel yours even made it to my language! I don’t like it that much but to me it’s ok. I can take this sh*it! Lmao!
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My 4 worst songs:
1: schnappy the crocodile….
https://youtu.be/Oe3FG4EOgyU?si=GKY_oznEqBxQSu5I
2: blue
https://youtu.be/68ugkg9RePc?si=wdH_s1liRIHSSCm-
4: last Christmas
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Thanks Owen! I needed to inform you cause this time was a damn massive one and it took place while I was online, more and more fake stuff….yuck
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I do like what AI made out of it
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Thanx guys for your c and fb! I appreciate it!
As a matter of fact I didn’t even write it for Halloween but I thought this oldy of mine fits these days, to get the forum a bit spooky 😉
I wrote it (once again) on a bus on my way home from… -
Van Gogh was told that he can’t paint, and he said to himself: now it’s on me to paint, paint, paint! Sing it, even as a Demo Recording but it’s on you to show the world! And besides that, how many singer get Grammys and you think…Ufff why him/her?!…
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Hey,
I think we have a good one here. At some points a bit rough but if you have your melody and it fits, it’s ok with me. Need to hear it then.
I agree with rainydayman on the rhyme topic, you got a good flow and suddenly it’s gone but … -
I still like the bridge but personally I’d like it faster. Dunno way maybe include a tongue twister but yep. Would change it even more I guess….🤔
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Uff… that’s a different one!
I do like the lyrics and especially the questions you put in there. It showed how ppl waist their lifes and happiness because they need to hold on to their self webbed net of lies and self-Defence.
I’m not s… -
Well 16 years Owen, what can I say…still miss it sometimes but it was hard work besides my live at university and my 2nd job. Today I know that it was way to much. Sometimes 26 shows in 30 days and many strange things that happened and some employee…
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Ok, seems as if it’s my turn now…
Some of you might know that I was a lokal boss in a catering company, serving at two of our major concert halls and many many different other showplaces. So you can guess that I’ve seen and met a lot of „famou…
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