Away in a manger,

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Last post for this year, modern take on an old xmas carol, Happy Holidays to all, Sid

[verse 1]

A bitter Winters night, December's almost done,

in a few days time, the World will be havin' fun.

Lettin' in a new year, while I try to forget the old,

hot toddys around a fire, it's only me who's cold.

[verse 2]

Cars drive past the underpass, I'm hidin' from view,

I doubt they would stop, even if they knew.

The shelter that I built, I fight for every day,

there's always someone else, tryin' to take it away.

[chorus]

Listen to my story, no please don't walk away,

just an ordinary guy, taken in by their lies.

Tryin' to raise the money, to get my family back,

slowly losin' memory, of my children's cries

[verse 3]

They're on their way to Walmart, Christmas shoppin',

only thoughts of presents, that, an' yulelog toppin's.

I remember my own kids, enjoyin' festive treats,

those happy days, before they threw us on the streets.

[chorus]

Listen to my story, no please don't walk away,

just an ordinary guy, taken in by their lies.

Tryin' to raise the money, to get my family back,

slowly losin' memory, of my children's cries

[verse 4]

They harrassed me to take the loans, the bank bosses,

now they want their money back, gotta cut their losses.

Pay the loan or sell the house, trouble's no one's buyin',

tossed our stuff out on the lawn, wife an' kids are cryin'.

[bridge]

My wife, she had a breakdown, an' my kids taken away,

our world was left in pieces, we went our separate ways.

When I rebuild my life, I'll get them back someday.

The priest listens to my story, says I need to pray.

[final chorus]

Listen to my story, no please don't walk away,

just an ordinary guy, taken in by their lies.

Tryin' to raise the money, to get my family back,

slowly losin' memory, of my children's cries

[outro]

I hear the choir singin', a carol "away in a manger",

climb a fence, break the sign, tellin' me of danger.

Memories of Christmas days, my family together again,

I hear the car horns beepin' , as I step out in the lane.


"Away in a manger, no crib for a bed,"

Comments

  • Another dark one! The joy of Christmas throws a lot of shade for those in desperate situations.

    Merry Christmas to you Sid!

  • That reads good, but painful. I hope you DO have a merry Christmas sid! Feel love and faith when the light comes back.
  • StoneFlowers
    StoneFlowers Cape Cod MA
    edited December 2024

    Like someone once told me...if you can evoke emotion in people with your song you've created something very special. Written like someone who has been in those shoes. Nice job Sid.

  • i agree with @StoneFlowers , excellent lyrics..

  • Thanks guys, please rest assured that I have no emotional attachment to any of the songs I write at all.

    I simply work my way down a list of ideas and write a song for each, very clinical and systemic I'm afraid.

    But I do thank you for your best wishes and hope you and yours have a great holiday,

    See you all in 2025.

    Sid

  • StoneFlowers
    StoneFlowers Cape Cod MA
    edited December 2024

    Well thank God you were never in the protagonist's shoes...but you sure do have a way of putting the reader/listener in them.

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