RainbowKeeper

It’s a good one, and you really did a great job with the surprising twist! I do like that. And I’ve learned something new, never noticed that you spell it Majorca, I had to look it up lol. For us it’s Mallorca.

in Only a call away Comment by RainbowKeeper May 20

Sailor

Wild ocean I feel you inside A‘
Wild ocean storms and waves so high
Filled only with sharks of all kind
And there is no place to hide
Getting seasick while I’m watching
Afraid of the darkne…

in Sailor Comment by RainbowKeeper May 18

Ty hummer!

in Sailor Comment by RainbowKeeper May 18

Thank you guys you are very kind!

in Sailor Comment by RainbowKeeper May 18

„Umbrella“ ….oh gesh I hate that one too. Still don’t understand the hype they made around it.

in What's the worst song you've heard? Comment by RainbowKeeper February 10

Seems we've become a nation of throw-away hearts
Just a nation of throw-away-hearts
….yes, I like this one and these lines especially.
RK

in The Kind of Freedom That Kills Comment by RainbowKeeper February 10

Hey,
I do like that piece, gives a good, positive feeling. Relatable and with a good ending.
Just a little thing: I think you can do better with the last line of verse one. To me it could be a little more…there. Stronger words I guess. …

in Can't Remember Her Name Comment by RainbowKeeper February 10

I agree on Sid’s idea. And btw sometimes you better keep it to yourself instead of spraying it on every wall…

in Sensitive Topics - Please Read and comment Comment by RainbowKeeper February 7

Nice one where ppl can relate to, especially for the younger ones situation like this often seems like „the end of the world“ and you captured this feeling well.

in Every tear hurts Comment by RainbowKeeper February 5

Thank you for this good piece of work!

in Gender identity Comment by RainbowKeeper February 5

Sad but nice one. It has a strong emotion. Would love to hear it with music.
I especially like the line: like a king reclaiming his throne.…there is so much anger and pain in this line
Hope I could have been helpful
RK

in Not from this heart Comment by RainbowKeeper January 28

I do like this one! It has a nice flow and a good, strong message.
And btw thanks for bringing back memories of my time at university. 🙂

in Forsaken Comment by RainbowKeeper January 26

It’s a nice and „simple“ one, I like it.

in Portami con te Comment by RainbowKeeper January 26

Nice way to „steal“ from yourself with the land of money line…but the whole piece has something. Just an idea I got while reading: why not bring the „true sense“ in? Could be a nice play-around with words and sound. That’s just my brain taking the p…

in My 2-Cents Comment by RainbowKeeper January 26

Ty guys

in Forgotten place Comment by RainbowKeeper January 22

Thanks bhengen. All I know is that I want some old school instruments for this one. Still trying to figure out the final melody.

in Forgotten place Comment by RainbowKeeper January 21

Thanks Owen!

in The spell Comment by RainbowKeeper January 18

THE SPELL

I know where you go when you leave A‘
It always breaks my heart in two
But I can not change what you do
And I’m too weak to change myself
Oh let me feel your fingertips
I cling to you, your te…

in The spell Comment by RainbowKeeper January 15

Thanks Owen and Sid! You marked the weak spots that I too have had in mind. I especially wasn’t completely happy with C.
But I think I worked something out. Let me know if the new version is better. Didn’t do much, but I think it helps the fl…

in The spell Comment by RainbowKeeper January 15

I love this! I had pictures and colours in my mind and felt every thing. Great stuff!
RK

in Butterflies Dream Comment by RainbowKeeper January 14

Thanks Elvis and Sid!

in Two wrongs don't make a right Comment by RainbowKeeper January 14

Hey,
I love the chorus you came up with. That’s a real good image.
I wondered a bit about vers 2, cause if the marriage is an open one, how or why „cheat secret on each other“? Maybe it’s just me and anyway I do like the rest of it.

in Two wrongs don't make a right Comment by RainbowKeeper January 13

A very solid piece of work you got here. Some longer lines but it fits in the blues. Like Owen I especially like the land of money line. Sometimes it needs just one line to put up the mirror to our society.
RK

in Sad Faces Comment by RainbowKeeper January 13

Thanks Owen. Sometimes it’s good to get a good night sleep and some friendly feedback to really finish a piece.