sidshovel

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  • Thanks for your comments Gavin, never crossed my mind, allotments being a typical British thing, but you're right.

    Too late to edit my original so if you don't mind , I'll add it here.

    Allotments are very small parcels of land that ca…

  • @OnlyGavin

    Thanks Gavin, appreciate the feedback. agree with yours and RDM's comments re dynamics. Strangely,…

  • @carroll

    Beautiful song Carroll, as always poetic lyrics painting a picture from minimal but visual lines.

    in Bloom Comment by sidshovel July 19
  • @MoraAmaroLaLoba

    Nice storyline Mora, the meandering music score did the theme justice. Enjoyed i…

    in Last Night Comment by sidshovel July 19
  • That is too beautiful Danny, the kind of song I wish I had the skill to write. Everthing about it was perfect to me,

    When I listen to the rubbish some stars are putting on their albums and then listen to this, you gotta ask yourself why.

  • Did you know that Tom Wait's singing voice is deliberately put on for effect.

    He copied the natural deep voice of one of his relatives because he liked it so much.

    in Mediocrity Comment by sidshovel July 19
  • @bhengen Good song Bill, very Bowie! Loved the way you weave the dynamism throughout. Particularly liked the prompt y…

  • @RainyDayMan

    You're right, I remember listening to this thinking it's a bit one-paced but by then somethin…

  • "I love the feedback, as long as it's consistent with all reviews"

    Let me reassure you, it is an issue you will no longer need to concern yourself with

    Sid .

  • I'm gonna start soundin' like a broken record soon and I really don't mean to.

    The music and the chorus go great together and there's a really good vibe with that

    I honestly can't say the same for the verses, again to me, it doesn't m…

  • Get to hear three good songs, make someone happy, not a bad start to the day!

    Good on ya, for posting.

    Sid

    in Mediocrity Comment by sidshovel July 17
  • To my ears there is a disconnect between fantastic lyrics and brilliant music. Neither does the other one justice. In the music I get a clear Stones vibe and you could build a song using the music as a scaffold, it's that good. Likewise the lyric…

  • Well this was an eye-opener!

    I saw the genres and determined I would favour them as listed 1, pop rock 2, pop grunge and lastly heavy metal base solely on my musical taste, heavy metal definitely last.

    In the spirit of the test, I lis…

    in Mediocrity Comment by sidshovel July 16
  • @dbloodworth

    Hi Danny,

    Thanks for the background, quite an eventful recent past. Hope your future…

  • @dbloodworth

    Danny, I took no offence whatsoever, so don't change anything.

    I only mention my sta…

  • @Domd Nice song that, enjoyed it very much. Good job on the harmonies, very tricky getting Ai to deliver what you want but …

  • I can appreciate the first two comments on the musicality of the song, sounds like you have a good grasp of the blues techniques on the guitar. Not being either a blues or a jazz fan, the vocals always sound hard to me an that tends to colour my …

  • Thanks Bill,

    Slide out the sheets real quiet, -> quietly sliding out of the sheets,

    I think it flows into the next line better, which brings me to the next line

    If you said - feet landing gently on t…

  • @dbloodworth

    Welcome Danny, glad to have you aboard.

    Absolutely a beautiful song, well written in…

  • @bhengen

    The sad thing is, these people dance better than me, oh well!

  • Excellent song Gavin, a song for all ages and times. Kind of song that transcends generations, I hope so anyway.

    Wonderful work, thanks to you and your friends.

    Sid

    P.S., consider changing the title to the Gnu Song, bit like "Es…

  • I'm stunned, this is just breathtaking, absolute masterpiece. This is by far your best yet Bill, not possible to take your ears off it, outstanding. The best way to describe it is mesmerizing. What a performance, you absolutely nuked it with Suno…

    in Out of time Comment by sidshovel July 14
  • You could have written this for Jarvis Cocker out of Pulp, he would have given this the justice it deserves.

    It's an outstanding piece of work that deserves a much greater exposure.

    Joy to listen,

    Thank you,

    Sid

  • @Domd

    Thank you for your comments, appreciated.

    Yes, it's sometimes difficult to squeeze in sarcasm/irony betw…

  • @OnlyGavin

    Thanks Gavin, appreciate your comments, love the pun, should have included that in the song.

  • @arnabs

    Thank you for posting, I enjoyed the piece very much. The music and the vocals were a joy.

    Constru…

  • liked the story, liked the rhymes, can't wait to hear the music, see if it all chimes.

    Thanks for posting, I think it's very good, well done.

    Sid

  • I liked the song very much Mora, one point from my unmusical ears, it seems the vocals are too low and are partially buried in the music. No doubt Chris Price will comment quite soon, wait for his feedback before replying to mine, I could be comp…

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