Still in love with me
carroll
Texas
https://suno.com/song/f217d4c3-5110-4cc2-b3b2-f1161068e659
[instrumental introduction]
[verse]
I’m nobody that matters in
The world according to you.
but i know better, yes I know;
when you think of me, you’re blue.
[pre chorus]
But you’re proud of your pedigree.
Ashamed you fell for me.
So you put me down to your friends.
Tell them you're glad you’re free.
[chorus]
You’ll never tell them, you’ll never tell them.
You’re still in love with me.
You’ll never tell them. You’ll never tell them
You’re still in love with me.
[verse]
It’s Ironic you’re blaming me.
it’s the truth according to you.
but you know better, yes you know better.
I was the one who left you.
[pre chorus]
but you’re proud and you’re arrogant.
bitter that I left you.
So you say you grew tired of me.
but we both know the truth.
[Chorus]
you’ll never tell them, you’ll never tell them;
You’re still in love with me.
You’ll never tell them,
you’ll never tell them
You’re still in love with me.
[guitar solo]
[bridge]
We both know you drove me away.
and now you want me back.
But that’s never going to happen.
That train has jumped the tracks.
[chorus]
You’ll never tell them, you’ll never tell them;
You’re still in love with me,
You’ll never tell them, you’ll never tell them;
you’re still in love with me.
[instrumental introduction]
[verse]
I’m nobody that matters in
The world according to you.
but i know better, yes I know;
when you think of me, you’re blue.
[pre chorus]
But you’re proud of your pedigree.
Ashamed you fell for me.
So you put me down to your friends.
Tell them you're glad you’re free.
[chorus]
You’ll never tell them, you’ll never tell them.
You’re still in love with me.
You’ll never tell them. You’ll never tell them
You’re still in love with me.
[verse]
It’s Ironic you’re blaming me.
it’s the truth according to you.
but you know better, yes you know better.
I was the one who left you.
[pre chorus]
but you’re proud and you’re arrogant.
bitter that I left you.
So you say you grew tired of me.
but we both know the truth.
[Chorus]
you’ll never tell them, you’ll never tell them;
You’re still in love with me.
You’ll never tell them,
you’ll never tell them
You’re still in love with me.
[guitar solo]
[bridge]
We both know you drove me away.
and now you want me back.
But that’s never going to happen.
That train has jumped the tracks.
[chorus]
You’ll never tell them, you’ll never tell them;
You’re still in love with me,
You’ll never tell them, you’ll never tell them;
you’re still in love with me.
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Comments
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That doesn't sound like folk to me , that sounds like Lady Gaga, the whole thing , mostly in the chorus
Think it just needs a flashier hook line. still in love with with me doesnt match the over the top intensity in the chorus this has.
I know you probably wrote lyrics first so you couldn't change it.
You could by changing the lyrics and doing a cover version of it.
That might change the singer too so it's not Gaga
Unless you want it this way.
Some potential here0 -
Suno's done a good job with this! Lovely sound.
I like the way you unfold the lyrics. It's starts with him and shifts to her. It's got punch.
I like how you describe him being a jerk, and her leaving him. It doesn't always come off well, but it does here. Feels very empowering.
You might shift "in" from line 1 to line 2 just to smooth it out rather than leaving it hanging. Minor.
Strong lyric that comes off very well musically. Well done.
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