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liked the story, liked the rhymes, can't wait to hear the music, see if it all chimes.
Thanks for posting, I think it's very good, well done.
Sid
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I liked the song very much Mora, one point from my unmusical ears, it seems the vocals are too low and are partially buried in the music. No doubt Chris Price will comment quite soon, wait for his feedback before replying to mine, I could be comp…
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Thanks for that, I figured he'd been caught doing something wrong but couldn't figure out what. I get it your using a generic theme here to cover a multitude of sins and vices. Knowing what I do now, it makes absolute sense, sorry about that.
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A beautiful song well written and performed. I love the way your lack of obvious rhymes doesn't detract from the flow of the song, it glides effortlessly from start to finish.
If I was to venture a slight comment, I found the storyline rais…
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Good point! I think at least one element is needed to move it from the aaaahhh to pass the tissue. Whilst I listed the possibilities, probably most listeners wouldn't extrapolate it to same nth degree but just up the sadness level enough to shed …
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You are right re the inclusi…
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The old tv with a broad top, held the picture for many years. With a flatscreen that was no longer possible. Relegated to a corner the unused old tv still held the picture, more a pedestal and shrine to his mother.
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@ChrisPrice Thank you Chris, you have no idea how much I value your opinion, especially this one.
To me, Ai i…
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Full disclosure: as written below the link, lyrics SS : music/vocals Ai
That's the benefit of Ai over session players, you can vary the concept in seconds.
Personally I prefer yours although mine sounds more Goth to me.
Bill,
Ran it for you check it out here
https://www.riffusion.com/song/5dcf1805-d038-4ef2-8f5a-724256065f84
@bhengen Give this a run Bill,
Prompt
uplifting, epic, melodic, excellent Male singer, building in intens…
God story Bill, valid as any other. Easy to follow, so I thank you for that. It flowed nicely and supported your thesis.
I read the lyrics twice before listening and I had a more spiritual take in my mind for the music. I was a bit surprise…
@derryk4real Innovative and out of the box, thoroughly enjoyable song. Simplicity of the theme hides the comple…
Never claimed to understand half of your work Bill, so I'll leave others to comment on the lyrics! What I do appreciate is what must have gone into getting this out of Suno. You either sweated over this one or struck gold with the first shovel lo…
Now that's made my day!
Thanks for that
Sid
Link's working fine, right click, open new tab, just tried it o.k.
It would appear the problem's a…
At your best with this one Carroll, raising the bar again! Very powerful but done in your unique style that drags you in before spitting you out exhausted.
I'm sure there are many writers who wished they'd written this one, another to be pr…
Beautiful song well delivered with an amazing vocal range. Lovely lyrics using a range of rhyming forms.
Enjoyed it very much, well done.
Sid
On this desert island, where's the electricity come from?
very decent of you Bill, doubt I'd be so magnanimous. The song is very graphic but it needs to be, you've captured the cruel sterility of the place and people, the inevitability and distance of decisions made. Promises that come back to haunt us.…
I hope it helps Bill,
Not unless someone's slippin' it in my Weetabix. To clarify, any and all my political songs are aimed solely and exclusively at politicians, not people and certainly not countries. The vast majority, in my opinion are self-serving and hypocritica…
Well that's just something else! Couldn't take my eyes off it.
Love the songs, the band, the visuals, mind-blowing.
Thanks for sharing that Bill.
Sid
Absolute genius! Great song, fantastic lyrics, who couldn't love a song like this, brilliant.
As to Ai, do whatever you want Dave, Ai is a toolbox, different people use it for different things.
I've long since given up caring what peo…
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