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Might work well as a dance track. I think the lyric takes a back seat to the catchy rhythm in this one.
It's easy on the ears, but it didn't really grab my attention.
I think the male version works better given the lyric, but they bot…
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Got a classic country feel to it.
I think we can all picture ourselves on that bar stool!
The music is a good match for the lyric. "It's my easy chair" - and that's the feeling I get from the music. It something easy and comfortable t…
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Yes, not instead of meaning, but in addition to.
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Great chorus! Really strong there, and the whole song works.
Message comes across clearly. Not sure I entirely agree with it, but that's a different thing!
And it doesn't feel at all like The Who (beyond the title), so no dramas there…
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Excellent song Tom! Very catchy, very polished feel, as well as having some teeth!
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Really interesting music you've chosen for this. Quite a frenetic pace.
I'm wondering how it would sound with a contrasting chorus, both musically and lyrically. Something more emotional / abstract and long drawn out syllables. " I am I, I …
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Very nice! Lovely gentle rhythm to it. It works very well as a duet.
"Even when we're not in like" is a lovely line, and a truth to boot!
Good choice to double up the chorus after the first time.
I'm not sure why you switched fr…
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I like this, but I think your key line: "All I wanna be...just a guy and a guitar" needs to be more singable for an average listener. It's a bit downbeat and clipped. Doesn't sound bad, it's just hard to join in.
Nice guitar riffs …
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Well that's a cynical, world weary one! But it's definitely got an attitude.
The copy Rolex / fake Gucci is a nice touch. Really shows them both faking it in a very visual concrete way.
And "lasted, till the rent came due" is a nice a…
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I'm afraid not. Haven't gone down that route.
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You are prolific Guy! And the world is a better place for having you and your songs in it. Keep 'em coming!
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That's really sweet! And nice to hear. Good luck to the both of you!
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Good feel to it. Not overly complicated lyrics, just something to get into.
Could easily imagine hearing this on the radio.
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That's a wild dare! Rather him than me, though I'm sure he'll have stories to tell for the rest of his life.
I liked the song. My favorite lines were:
Can’t get there driving
Can’t get there ta…
Great song! First thing I'd say is that you can hear the quality of the song in both versions. If the songwriting aspect is your focus, either version is going to work to display that.
The Suno version is more polished. If you want polished…
I like the rhythm and vibe of this. Found myself bopping along to it.
My main suggestion would be to try to differentiate the chorus more from the verse musically. Feels like they're using common chords / melody at the start there.
I …
Welcome to the forum Brandon. Nice to have you with us!
Well this is a disturbing song! Sends a shiver down my spine, which hopefully it was meant to!
It's a long song, which is really only an issue if you have commercial aspirations,…
Well this bound to appeal to anyone who likes a down to earth woman - including me!
Nice write Carroll, and Suno's done a good job for you.
No worries Bill! You know what you are after, and I'm confident you'll stand your ground when you feel you should.
That sounds so natural, both the vocal and the guitar. I really couldn't pick that as AI generated. And it came out well!
I like the whole "slice of life" feel of it. The Facebook verse got me!
The part about Bobby isn't 100% clear to…
I think you have a wonderful chorus there. Feels strong to me. And the title plays to it, so that's a plus.
The verses around it vary in structure a lot - different numbers of lines, and different lengths of say line 1 across different vers…
You always show me how far a lyric can be pushed out of "typical" zones and still sound like a song.
But I didn't find listening to this as rewarding as reading the lyric. It's an interesting topic and worth exploring. But…
I think that came out very well. The song itself is very good, so it has a strong foundation to work with.
The guitar and bass felt the strongest to me. They seemed uniformly good.
The vocals were mostly good, and having the 2nd vocal…
If you've got the ti…
Well that's a wail of sadness - full of emotion. Slow ballad works very well for the lyric.
Powerful chorus. You might consider doubling up on the "Not for me" there.
"Not for me" sums up the song nicely, but it's not a title likely t…
Love that opening:
Somebody out there hates me
But they don’t know it yet
Got exactly that quirky feeling that you were talking about. Same with the final line of that …
Wild! That made me chuckle, though I will admit I didn't listen the whole way through.
Love to! As soon as inspiration strikes! And thank you.
And back at ya! How about one from you too!
I'll tell my family it's just for my health!! They can wear ear plugs. 😁
I have used it, though it's not yet my preferred approach. I've tried giving it a lyric and seeing what it can do with it (especially if I don't have any ideas myself) and the results are ok, quite polished, but not better melodically than what I…
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