Rt. 23

Domd
New Jersey
Maybe one more, don't think I posted this here . One of the best rockers I've done since working with ai.
My lyrics into Ai
https://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=14863578
Jam pack
traffic backed for miles
there's a sad sack
givin you the smiles
hope he knows that
your window isn't openin
That band Knack
the song called "My Sharona"
pop a tic tac
commercial for Corona
And thunder cracks
no way, this cant be happenin
Do you need to clear your mind
leave that rearview hell behind
Do you ever think of me
On route 23?
it's a Tuesday
people back to work
aint no snooze day
surrounded by the jerks
who just cant choose a lane
You honk but no one's listenin
Do you need to clear your mind
leave that rearview hell behind
Do you ever think of me
On Route 23
I just wanna know if twice
you thought a second chance'd be nice
has a tire blown for me
on Route 23?
It's a long ride either way
adds two hours to your workin day
do you see me in the middle of the fray?
Do you need to clear your mind
leave that rearview hell behind
Do you ever think of me
On Route 23?
I just wanna know if twice
you thought a second chance'd be nice
has a tire blown for me
on Route 23?
My lyrics into Ai
https://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=14863578
Jam pack
traffic backed for miles
there's a sad sack
givin you the smiles
hope he knows that
your window isn't openin
That band Knack
the song called "My Sharona"
pop a tic tac
commercial for Corona
And thunder cracks
no way, this cant be happenin
Do you need to clear your mind
leave that rearview hell behind
Do you ever think of me
On route 23?
it's a Tuesday
people back to work
aint no snooze day
surrounded by the jerks
who just cant choose a lane
You honk but no one's listenin
Do you need to clear your mind
leave that rearview hell behind
Do you ever think of me
On Route 23
I just wanna know if twice
you thought a second chance'd be nice
has a tire blown for me
on Route 23?
It's a long ride either way
adds two hours to your workin day
do you see me in the middle of the fray?
Do you need to clear your mind
leave that rearview hell behind
Do you ever think of me
On Route 23?
I just wanna know if twice
you thought a second chance'd be nice
has a tire blown for me
on Route 23?
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Comments
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Good feel to it. Not overly complicated lyrics, just something to get into.
Could easily imagine hearing this on the radio.
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Thanks. Not trying to be overly complicated with the lyrica here. But I will say, it's one of my best lyrics.
Economy of words, if I tried writing different lyrics it wouldn't work too well.
I think this is the best tune I've done with Ai .thanks again!0
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