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Great lyrics here - I really like the uplifted music as the song progresses - sounds great
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I love this song - very Townes Van Zandt
On the recording - are you using an auto-tune - if so- would love to know what you are using, we all know I could use it
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A friend loaned me a 1984-vintage synth for a couple days so I took full advantage of putting as many sounds as I could into one song lol
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This is a really great track. That chorus (he's rollin', on the road again) is great.
I might tighten this up into a 3:20 length song - I love the guitar solos at end but it detracts from the really great pop chorus - think of it as the s…
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A modern version of Elvis Costello's Tramp the Dirt Down
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This is solid -
In the "had a thing for an asian woman" genre, you can't top Year of the Cat lol
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CHORUS I would change to:
Well I've givin' you all I got,
everythin', you asked me for.
One thing you gotta promise,
feel free to go lookin' round for more...
This adds a little twist and puts the narra…
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Sounds like an updated version of The Beach Boys California Feelin'
Love the lyrics and the vibe of this song
Lyrically reminds of Elvis Costello The Other Side of Summer
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This is a wonderful song. It feels like one of those songs pulled from the ether like it always existed.
I would bump the backing music up in the mix and take a little echo off the vocal - its a nice vocal for the song and doe…
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Wow - This is a great lyric. Really insightful and thoughtful stuff -
I also like your performance and delivery - you skillfully emphasize key words and concepts, I get a Tom Waits vibe from your delivery that I really think is effective<…
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