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  • Great lyrics here - I really like the uplifted music as the song progresses - sounds great

  • This is a great song - remind me of what Jessie Welles is doing -

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  • I love this song - very Townes Van Zandt

    On the recording - are you using an auto-tune - if so- would love to know what you are using, we all know I could use it

  • A friend loaned me a 1984-vintage synth for a couple days so I took full advantage of putting as many sounds as I could into one song lol

  • I use LALAI - it is great for splitting tracks on old songs or removing vocals I'm not happy with on tracks I no longer have the master.

    in Ai Issues Comment by jgkojak July 2024
  • This is a really great track. That chorus (he's rollin', on the road again) is great.

    I might tighten this up into a 3:20 length song - I love the guitar solos at end but it detracts from the really great pop chorus - think of it as the s…

  • A modern version of Elvis Costello's Tramp the Dirt Down

  • This is solid -

    In the "had a thing for an asian woman" genre, you can't top Year of the Cat lol

  • CHORUS I would change to:

    Well I've givin' you all I got,

     everythin', you asked me for.

    One thing you gotta promise,

    feel free to go lookin' round for more...


    This adds a little twist and puts the narra…

  • Sounds like an updated version of The Beach Boys California Feelin'

    Love the lyrics and the vibe of this song


    Lyrically reminds of Elvis Costello The Other Side of Summer

  • This is a wonderful song. It feels like one of those songs pulled from the ether like it always existed.


    I would bump the backing music up in the mix and take a little echo off the vocal - its a nice vocal for the song and doe…

  • Wow - This is a great lyric. Really insightful and thoughtful stuff -

    I also like your performance and delivery - you skillfully emphasize key words and concepts, I get a Tom Waits vibe from your delivery that I really think is effective<…

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