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Thanks guys!!
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Appreciate it. One of my favorite story telling songs.
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Your usual clever musings Gain. Thouroughly enjoyed the song!
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good lyrics. cool song!
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Mr. Used to be
Verse
He was handsome, he was dashing
People would applaud.
He was flying, he was flying
Till he came down hard.
Now he’s nothing, he is no one.
Mr. Used to be.
Pre chorus
Remin…
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Good job of storytelling and vivid imagery
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Thanks, posting a few from the past when I was collaborating.
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The turning of the leaves
Verse
The passing of the seasons
Have brought me to my knees;
Changed the way I look at life,
The turning of the leaves.
The failure of my wisdom.
All that I didn’t …
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yep it’s catchy. Don’t have space on soundcloud to post much so it ke
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Great idea thanks guys!
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Thanks Sid
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Thanks . Point is to invoke emotion!
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Love writing this dark stuff! Channeling my younger Heavy metal days/ Sabbath. Not writing near as much as I used to but I think maybe I'm getting better before my witts fizzle out!
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Intellectual metal! Who would've thought it . Definitely interesting!
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Nice twist on the lyric Sid. Enjoyed the melody and vocals.
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Appreciate it, thanks.
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Don’t be afraid to post things that are dark or foreboding.
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Thank you. it means a lot coming from you.
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Thank you. One of my favorites!
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It is not condemning one religion. Religion has been a source of war for as far as written history goes back. It’s the atom bomb man must survive.
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yep
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No money in music for writers these days!
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Well it frees me from waiting on collaborations. I had about a hundred songs done as collabs over the past 12 years but I didn’t have much control over how they were presented. Some i’ve redone with Suno and they were an improvement. Others were bet…
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Loving this! My kinda stuff! Good lyrics and the music and vocals do it justice.
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Love this song! Nothing not to like.
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Nice Dylan vibe to it.
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