Mindless

bhengen · May 22

Words Me, Music -Suno

https://suno.com/s/Xc9WzhokfLogN4Oz

[Verse 1]

Black empty void

Eyes white clouds

Mind clouds intelligence lost

[Refrain]

Mindless released carefree

[Verse 2]

Books of distorted pages

Confused meaning of words

Ignorant words bleeds arrogance

[Refrain]

Mindless released carefree

[Verse 3]

Barefooted dandelions

One breeds into many

Flowering many obtuse diacritics

[Refrain]

Mindless released carefree

sidshovel · May 22

@bhengen Sorry Bill, but this one didn't grab me anywhere, the words are drowned in the music and I struggled to make any sense of it. Normally, no matter how abstract, I come away with something but in this case I couldn't grasp anything.

RainyDayMan · May 22

Wonderfully moody piece. Amazing what Suno can do nowadays when prompted properly. I will say it is very difficult to understand the words in this one though. Without the lyric, I would have been lost.

It seems like one to drift away on.

TammyB · May 22

I agree with @sidshovel -The written lyrics doesn't sound anything like the song. I can't make out what the lyric is saying. The good thing is, I do like the melody. :-)

bhengen · May 23

@sidshovel , @RainyDayMan , @TammyB , thanks. guys. kind of actually what I was going for in a sense lyric wise. I'll have to re-listen to it. it sounded fine to me.

carroll · May 23

Reminds me of Beatnik poetry

bhengen · May 23

@carroll - Thanks for the comment. it's a really bad attempt at using starlight by king crimson.. Even to me, this makes no sense. :)

HummerWisdom · May 25

@bhengen Okay. Love the sparseness of your lyric and how it still says so much. Be the first to admit I had to look up "diacritics". Yeah, now that I did I sort of get it! Now for that listen; can't wait! Goin' now......and I'm lost in space and time....nice one, Bill oh, beautiful chord changes! And God how I wish I could sing as such!! And BAM!! Hit me in the face!!!

Completely Blew Me Away!

Renee 💌

bhengen · May 25

@HummerWisdom - Thanks renee. I was trying to convey stupidity and arrogance in as few words as possible , and it tanked lyrically. I've had some suggestion on how to clean it up.. I'll get to it at some point :)

HummerWisdom · May 25

@bhengen While I didn't get 'stupidity and arrogance' conveyed, I still enjoyed it very much. Reminds me I got a song about stoopid on the back burner some place..

R. 😲

bhengen · May 25

@HummerWisdom - this wasn't intended on directed at any one person, I was trying to make a social commentary about some people in general. specifically those in forums, that spew hate and vitriol rather than offering anything constructive

HummerWisdom · May 25

@bhengen unfortunately, those sort of people are everywhere!

R.

ElvisNash · May 26

pretty abstract Bill

Mindless

Comments

Howdy, Stranger!

Categories