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@Billy_Lunch_Money Thanks for the nfo. I'm looking into fruityloops and a couple others...
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Truly a great love song. The way you got the ai to emote the feelings you captured in the lyrics is great and your choice of the piano being the main musical focus was perfect for the song. It is a well written piece and my favorite was as others…
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Thanks for the compliments.
@MoraAmaroLaLoba @ChrisPrice That second line of the tick verse I am not satisfied with. Go figure.
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This came out great man! I enjoyed everything you've done here and liked the different octaves? you were able to hit in the second chorus. (if I used the wrong term please let me know)
Thanks for the call out to my suggested modification b…
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"what I have read your words seek the depth of what is not seen at first sight"
Isn't that all artist? We seek to express what is unseen by others but through our personalized lens of perception.
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I really liked this entire thing. The lyrics, the music applied and the vocals all made this good and it touched me as a song should do.
I liked too many lines to pick a favorite as so many have what it takes to touch the listener or reade…
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Great intro to the song! The concept of this is genius and you did amazingly well constructing the lyrics.
I read the lyrics before opening the song and envisioned the sound of the vocals almost exactly as you sang them. The music fits bet…
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Diving into the older posts so I can see more lyrics and this did not disappoint at all. The song is well written and has the depth of emotions needed to convey the feelings of love and a sense of lament for the yellow breaky crayon girl. I enjoy…
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You've a way with words that is very unique and refreshing to a long winded poet such as myself. Your lyrics brevity and almost stark simplicity has a softness to it which elevates them. Mixed with your creativity and vision, you create some cool…
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Emotionally powerful and well put together. I can also see this done to blues a motif and the fat sounds to provide the undercurrents of your lyrics.
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All this is done with VST? I gotta get me some lol
This was really well put together. I do like the lyrics as I can envision this as a part of the whole where the song moves into this ethereal plane from a more vibrant melody and rhythm.
A humble thank you for your words of encouragement. We live and die each day in our own minds and emotions which is part of what inspired that specific line.
Simply awesome! Nicely done and even though there are differing uses of 'person' across your verses it works really well.
My favorite part was the bridge:
Care for those that care for you.
Their love forever will stay …
So you in this but as mentioned above missing the you in it. I could feel the lack of your emotional connection to the words as I listened. I hope to hear a revised version with your emotional punch you possess.
I concur about the lines R…
Good lyrics with depth of emotion said in simple words that make it clear and easy to relate to. I envisioned the music described and feel this will be a solid intro to your works. It carries a good arc across the song and I liked the closing lin…
I enjoy the theme of the lyrics and how it relates to thoughts of a person in the past and the choice and decisions made internally but believe you have so much room for expansion in them. But I am a writer not a musician and see potential in mos…
Great lyrics and good message. I enjoyed their flow and how they feel natural and organic in their structure. When will we hear its demo?
This was really well done man. Loved the lyrical magic about the road you infused using colors. It set it off and your voice made it more desirable to be on the road. Again you have a great style on the guitar which is the heartbeat of this song.…
Wow man, this came out great! I loved your harmonies and the chorus seems to be exactly the right 'punch' in the song itself and lyrically. Thanks for the shout out with the lyrical modification but never necessary. Shared thoughts are always fre…
Sorry for the days of silence. Was ambushed by family and had little time for anything else.
Thanks to everyone who commented on my first assembly of a song and finalizing the lyrics to a hastily constructed piece a little over a week ago.…
yeah, AI takes my lyrics and outputs it to whatever I specify generally.
I tried a lot of other genres and when it wasn't fast tempo the vocals sounded worse than these do.
I think the distortion of the music helps the vocals pass marg…Superb arc and well penned bruv.
I enjoyed the hook and it's twist. The entire time my thoughts on the fear were related to her youth and invincibility but there you go changing course and tossing in the plot twist!@BeatlesFan64 It was in her delivery Tommy, words are flat without the vocal acuity to breath life into em.…
Really nice and smooth. I found this song to be well executed and is as concise as it gets. No flowery shrubs as a detraction. The depth of emotional connection is strong too. The chorus opening line + 1/2, are perfect and set up the plea so beau…
Yes if. . .
I carry quite a few ifs.
I enjoyed the lyrics and how it forces the question if, front and center. No elliquence or colorful dressing, just IF.
The music is a good foundation for Thule lyrics but I think they need to…Smooth and cohesive as refining it does.
I'm developing it further trying to go deeper into the rabbit hole of the creation process and how important it is for 'the bard' to write a song taking him home. Already have a few more verses and idea…@MoraAmaroLaLoba As a fellow epicurian I will dive deeper into what @RainyDayMan said:
I your kitchen as you're making whatever food it is, immerse yourself into the act of it.
Grind out every little detail. Think it, see it, smel…Welcome.
I'd have to agree with the comments above and encourage you to keep exploring your strengths but also dive into what you aren't as strong in.
Stepping outside our comfort zone we find new knowledge, experience new perceptions a…
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