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Being a Bean Town brother a two word comment is in order.
Wicked Awesome! Lol
Loved your lyrics and the truth of it. Also not able us how you kept just the right amount of tension in the verses to keep me wondering what word… -
It showed through the well constructed emotional conveyance. I am glad to have read it and felt its depth.
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Ohhhh geeez! So keep to 8 syllables but do as I want. Good advice and clear direction for my journey. lol
Looks like I will write and write as I always do but keep letting you critique so I can learn from your experiences, then make my ow…
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SO new to everything but I have been immersed in learning how to get suno AI to do as I want using meta tags and basic descriptors. At first I believed it to be pure garbage as any song I would try to generate would skip lyrics or not keep them i…
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Well constructed and clearly conveys it's meaning.
I like it and enjoyed the shared experience emotionally.
Real powerful first verse almost pressing the songs meaning upon me.
The following verses enforced the theme and b… -
@RainbowKeeper So it is dependent upon syllable count per line which comprises 32 syllables in a verse.
Is that to say all "verses" should adhere to that strict standard?
I understand the call outs with the longer or more com… -
I too felt summer but then again, it's always summer down here.
Loved the line Everybody's wearing summer smiles. That hooked me in and it just got more 'humid'as it went along.
Also Let's wash the salt water off our lips was ano… -
The more I learn the less I understand. Lol
At least I am enjoying the process and getting good feedback.
There are so many things to learn and understand but as I am ideas keep forming. They complicate my comprehension and I end… -
Where would I go? This place is awesome!
So now that I now to structure the verses and choruses into VVCVCBC as you showed above, I can arrange my words properly to fit the standards, however my line length obviously is incorrect as I'v… -
Yes, that makes more sense. Since it is an intangible (a concrete does not work there. I still have a very long way to go before I start pumping out lyrics like you guys.
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Thanks Sid. I finally have a structure for my writing now. I had been scouring the web to find how a song is assembled. I'll definitely follow this on my songs from here on out.
With each day you guys are teaching me sooooo much
Tha…
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It is your style and works as icy said, leaves it open to interpretation and imagination.
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I would like to toss in a possibility for one of RDM's suggestion if I may. Try the word Cover lost, like the peel of an orange as it seems to reinforce the next line.
RDM your hearing eye is astute!
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Good song, strong lyrics and ai did a decent job on it. Like how you got the vocals down to a southern sounding style.
To get the YEAH try this or some variation. Try using ALL CAPS with ! or ? to change voice volume. Another thing to try …
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What a great song man. It's got such a good narrative to it and as usual you nailed it. Nice work on the guitar, very smooth throughout and its such a fast tempo you kept. Great vid too!
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@Plain_Jane Happy is an understatement, it's awesome! You can sing along with angels and match their heavenly sou…
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@RainbowKeeper I took you advice and think it's ready for prime time lol. Thanks for your direction and guid…
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This is amazing thanks to you're voice. So nicely done. Thank you for making my words come to life.
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I think I get it as it makes the verse more personal and emotionally relatable but also ties the words together to flow better.
Mind you, I took a very metaphorically decorated poem and converted it over, or tried. More than 3/4 of it w… -
@RainbowKeeper Awesome! Thank you thank you thank you... I am deeply appreciative of the critique. It is jus…
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Appreciate the compliments and critiques it is how I will grow and become better.
Made the changes on the fx @…
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@MoraAmaroLaLoba very true about the bitter stuff being useful to us. Wisdom doesn't come cheap!
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This sounded so pro. I enjoyed the lyrics and story you told through them. It is a real hook for your story as is very relatable. Definitely a matured song that took time to polish. Hope to hear more and more from you.
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Intensity is passion amplified. Within you and everyone there lays a passion for something. Until that something is realized and embraced, intensity will sit by waiting.
You have not only found it, but embraced it so you can express it.
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Just wow man! You can bend notes with your voice and the strings, amazing work here
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Well met and welcome back.
I liked the lyrics and they carry you through from start to finish with its story about acceptance and not giving up after going through such trials. The title brings depth to it as it shows the internal stren… -
Sadly after over 40 years of writing poetry my brain is in poetry mode with a consistency that would turn any song into a Dr Seuss rhythm. Haha
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Just wow brother. Loved how you got the duet emotively fluid and smooth. Nice narrative arc, depth in the meaning and well made.
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The internal banter over an AI generated voice being natural... Hahaha
As was told to me by a wise and profilic master we all know here, AI vocals are what sounds the most AI!
Still think the song is great and lyrics are, well, explica… -
These lyrics are good!
Stormy clouds cry their tears/days have turned into years. Epic is I ever heard a lyric.
Not much into the show tune genre but the wording intro as your mentioned seems to be a bit ethereal for the song.
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