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Thanks man. i was th…
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Nice! yeah cool rend…
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thanks for taking th…
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thanks, i totally ag…
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2 songs in a day? 🔥
yeah, wherever you end up it won't be nap time.
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I admire your ability to get a song out of anything and have it sound good.
great line (sad and probably true) = Justice got blindfolds, pockets too
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the Soul version sounds really cool. the lyrics fit well into that genre.
i agree with RaindDayMan the weather metaphor is ambiguous. when she is gone its like having all the bad weather? Perhaps The rain is beating against his door, tryi…
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i probably didn't
yeah, i dint think c…
LOL , i;m a dum dum …
Very cool. sounds really good, quality is sharp. melody flows well.
nice job.
my 1 crit would be, i'd like the "walk on fire" to hit little harder. its good and i want more.
cool song. funny, nice acoustic guitar playing.
if you were there you'd have the whole place singing along. 👍️
my fav lines:
Prescription says “Don’t offend no one”
Side effects include never havin’ fun
another solid tune.
I think it would be hilarious if it was called "Butt Hurt"
People say i'm mean , they call me a jerk
Vocal and music/ beat pair great together. I got buddy who is real into this style of music. Sounds just like something he would buy.
nice job.
good title, original and stands out.
cool concept/story.
i like the whole thing.
2 little crits: the "town by town" line, my ear wanted a rhyme there cuz i'm a noob.
"outdrive it fast" line felt a bit clunky. it might j…
i agree. Great hook.
i like this confession line :
I said, “I wasn’t brave, I wasn’t clean
I wasn’t what I swore I’d be
But I never kicked a man when he was down
And I never blamed You for me”
we…
i love the way this sounds, real catchy makes me feel like i'm 17 again. Brings me back to when all i did was listen to this type of music. i added this to my play list.
As i was reading along with the song i'm thinking Hole doesn't rhyme …
Just the song and politics aside, I liked the sound of the 1st verse the best, as it has a Johnny Cash vibe for me.
Every line has bite to it, they rhyme, they're creative and not predictable, theme is consistent though out the song.
<…I like the lyric and melody on the chorus. The 1st chorus and the build up is really cool. I wanted to hear more of that all the way through the second chorus.
Not sure how I feel on the last line and the ending, seems to end abruptly.
great hook. a lot of great lines in this and imagery.
by coincidence i'm just finishing with a song slightly different subject but has similarities, (teeth, graves, time, crowns) 🤦♂️ when i post in a few more days I didn't copy. 😁
yes, the good old da…
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