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both are good. if i …
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nailed the style on this. I'm always impressed whenever someone can make a song with so few words sound good.
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requesting electronic dance beat
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This is good. Sounds like something I would hear on the radio.
the last note on the ending was just a little bit awkward to me though. like it needed a fade out or something.
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i like the smooth clear vocal paired with the aggressive beat/ guitar. Usually this type of music distorts the vocal in some way.
this sounds really good. well done.
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this sounds great 👍️ I'd DL and listen to this.
the only comment i have is: love the beginning line of each verse, but the very first one makes me feel like i'm starting in the middle of a song. the way its starts with "And" like there sh…
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i used to listen to Alexi Murdoch cool finger picked acoustic stuff. might fit what you are looking for. https://www.yout…
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Nice! theres still s…
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nice job.
i like how you put the hook as the first line of the section. it works.
very simple and not overly wordy (like many of my songs)
and sounds great.
good lines =
You say, compared to ice, I’m col…
i get what you mean.…
love the sound on this. made me think of the Doors. The format with each season as a verse and the chorus as "passing seasons..." really works. To me song is about life, and progressively gets sadder and more lonely and ends with only me.
cool sound, lyrics flow well with the music. 👍️
in the chorus did you mean to put "Don't shut me " or "Don't shoot me" ?
feedback ideas i noticed =
the line - "Those who don’t are lame" i feel like there could better more cleve…
haha, well glad i di…
Ok did some more work on this. let me know what you think.
thanks for help.
https://suno.com/s/TUYvIA1az5iRN1YL
[intro 4 bars]
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cool idea for a song. sounds good.
it would be fascinating if he lived in todays age what he could do.
I like your EDM style stuff. . this is interesting.
its almost like you sampled lines from a western movie and worked it into a Dance Beat. When i was in my mid teens I'd Make collage art cutting things out of magazines to make different …
Has a cool sound/vibe. could dig in a little deeper if you post the lyrics.
probably the 2nd wor…
the first part does sound a little like a sitcom, but its not bad. I don't remember seeing the original post.
verse 3 is my fave part. I don't think it needs to be repeated as V4 tho. if nothing else to keep the run time down.
Thanks Rainy, glad y…
to be young again, what a fun and exciting time of life. from a fathers perspective i am not ready to deal with that scenario anytime soon.
nice line = And the way you float on clouds
As thin as your denial
so…
haha...sounds gross.…
I like the story behind it, and the nick name its funny. I could see this being played on one of those Disney channel teen shows.
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thanks for the help.…
fun song. I don't know what a motorcade of love is, bunch of people driving up to make out point? haha..
might be splitting hairs here, but just my thoughts to consider. i'd consider replacing "fly" with "drive" and/or modify this line
…well written. People doing slimy deals disguised as something else, they think they aren't accountable to anyone.
only nit pick = the outro; God created law and justice so that didn't land for me.
haha..well it could …
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