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ugh.. i noticed my cut and paste doubled up the last 2 lines of the chorus too (on this post). oh well.
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oh my gosh. i got to verse 2 before i caught on. He did what?!
this is like the "Ladies Man" movie and Leon Phelps.
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Nice vibe, good up beat happy melody. its nice.
i should try doing a love song, but i feel like a cheesy dope. 😆
one idea if you wanted to try on the bridge :
cut out all the filler and go right to this =
I'm si…
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52 inches, but I mea…
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this sounds very familiar. one of your other songs recently?
it sounds good, i like these lines:
-Coffee’s bitter but the truth is worse-
-Truth don’t shout, it just stands there still
Watching time collect its bill-
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Thanks! thats me and…
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Nicely done, relaxed feel good bar song. Reminds me of Piano Man. Sounds good.
Nice job the original recording as well. 👍
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Very cool hearing this preformed by living people. little different feel than the Suno version.
Does sound like Dylon. haha 😄
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Jesus on Spotify and…
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well done.
the combo of the chorus and bridge, perfect.
great line - Truth’s too expensive
That’s why the world buys lies-
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good song.
i didn't need to sleep when i was in my 20s.
now i'm old and stealing's a crime
I can't stay up past my bed time.
haha..😆
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Another great song. very true and reassuring message.
I like this line -When I’m thread bare and so tired -
well done.
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internal rhymes are fun. interesting style you chose. wasn't expecting that. sounds good.
just reading the lyrics i had a 80s rap sound in my head. the Ashes and Dust line might make a good chorus or break after verse 2 and 4.
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Good Song, well written. V-1 sets it up great, chorus is right on. The live sound makes it fun. 💪
Brings to mind - Matthew 7:21-23
“Not everyone who says to me, ‘Lord, Lord,’ will enter the kingdom of heaven, but the one…
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well done. knowing the backstory really makes this strong. verse 1 and 2 really good, not a lot of words but they carry the weight.
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good write. not sure what Tapes of Jesus is reference to. is that the Bible on cassette or something else i'm not aware of?
I like that Suno got Waylon to sing this. 😁 Sounds good.
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this is great.
so many good lines
"Mama says I’m dangerous
To leftovers after eight"
the cover art on Suno for this is something else. lol.
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very punny 😆.
yes, melody is very good for this song. Just a suggestion if you wanted to make the "sweet blue eyes" hit a little harder only use it in the chorus. or not use a chorus and put it at the end of each verse as refrain.
consider tweaking this…
this is good. i don't think i have heard you do a country song yet. i like the chorus. nice hook.
The outro is good i want it to last just a little longer with a 1/2 repeat and slow fade out. maybe?
sort of like =
[Outro]
Sad song. i feel bad for that guy.
verse 2 is strong with the inner rhymes. i like how you turned the tables on the last chorus.
great song. well done. i want to listen to it more but its too sad for me 😓
very nice.
that opening verse is well done.
music and vocal sounds great. 👍️
I like that you tried something a little different than normal.
creative angle, good writing. some of the lines are typoed or worded funny, little confusing reading it (what Jesus what do). but it sounded good. reminds me of George Micheal…
finally had time to listen to this one.
its good, reminds me of Mark 2:17 "On hearing this, Jesus said to them, 'It is not the healthy who need a doctor, but the sick. I have not come to call the righteous, but sinners.'"
Sounds cool. I agree I think a funky bass would work here.Life is like a rickety carnival ride.
You could go flying off or make it to the end and still lose your lunch. 😆
Good song. I like the bridge.Nice relaxing sound.
I like this paradoxical = “A faceless face facing me”
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