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Sorry for your neighbor
Nice surprise on your wallet
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@RainyDayMan
Thanks for your nice comments. “Going somewhere” was my working title. When I was done I thought about changing it to “train to nowhere” . But decided to keep it, as it was more positive as she empowers her self to go somewhere,… -
The chorus works well. I like it.
Dali was an early influence on me. Opened me up to draw any crazy scene I could imagine. Sadly forgot a lot of my art history I learned in college. -
Great lyrics, love the setting and concept.
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Gracias 🙏
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I don’t know what the hidden meaning is, but it’s fun and sounds good, reminds me of journey to the center of your mind, and other songs of that era I can’t remember. 👍
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Sounds great 👍 , sorry don’t have much else to add.
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thank you sir. I app…
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love the concept, sounds good. well done.
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thanks glad you like…
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this is nice. verse 4 good lines to end on.
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sounds good, i like the use of contrasting words.
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Nice one, i like it.
perfect style/ sound for this song. 💪
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i like it more now. …
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good song.
like this line
-"But the harbor’s full of prophets
Selling maps that don’t exist"
suggestion for possible tweak = And the louder Folks start cheering / Closer the ice is gettin’
could wo…
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this is silly in a fun/ funny-entertaining way.
music style and story.
i like the way she says "cotton"
verse 4 made me laugh.
nice one. 😆
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strange combination on this one with cowboy outlaw sining about Disney fairy tails. reminds me of Shreck (movie) in a way. pullback the curtain type thing.
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Thanks Rainy, I'm ha…
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Wow. Great job.
Vocal delivery fantastic. I can still feel it.
these lines very nice :
Don’t fall asleep, even though I’m gone
Leave a little light in your heart turned on
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Verse 2 is very good.
I like how you changed the chorus up right at the end to being on the train. now he's in the mess instead of laughing from the sidelines.
Till the smoke rolls under your own front street => thro…
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great emotion on the vocal. i didn't know what "whoever loves least" was going to mean in the song. a surprising twist for me. nice one. 👍️
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i like all the rhymes in V1 and the nursery rhyme orbital cows over moons. 😆
very laid back and smooth sound.
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thanks. i had a coup…
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thank very much 😊
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thank you thank you…
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thanks. yeah i'm a …
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over all this sounds nice relaxing 70s style. type of music my mom listened to when i was a kid.
verse 2- you want to "escape the shelter of the moon". I got the feeling that the shelter of the moon was a good thing. it would make more se…
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i like this line,
"Turns out interest grows faster
Than corn in June"
credit card/loan rates.. yikes!.
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thank you, glad you …
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Melody and the vibe you were going for sounds good. i like the concept.
i agree there are some contradictions going on. a few minor tweaks would clear it up.
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