There Will Never Be Rain
Tried this in a couple different genres, like how the soul version came out...
SUNO:
https://suno.com/song/70bcb733-c9b8-4e9f-84b0-6a0d99916f50
Original:
https://suno.com/song/07cf6fe5-2e27-46c7-b3b0-1e9766cc8c3c
THERE WILL NEVER BE RAIN
[Verse 1]
Since you've been gone
I've been watching for the weather
Since you've been gone
I've been waiting on the sun
There's nothing here but rust and shadow
There's nothing here but dust on the road
[Chorus]
There will never be rain inside my window
There will never be rain inside my door
[Verse 2]
Since you've been gone
I've been keeping to my bed, yeah
While mountains block the sky
Since you've been gone
I've been dreaming of desert
Like a ship abandoned high and dry
[Chorus]
There will never be rain inside of my window
There will never be rain inside my door
[Bridge]
What you waiting for
From the sky, from the heavens
As the nights across, blow me across the floor
[Instrumental]
[Verse 3]
Now everything's covered in memory
Dreams imagined before the fall
When the wind turns water to ice
You have to run before you can crawl
[Chorus]
There will never be rain inside my window
There will never be rain inside my door
There will never be rain inside my window
Rain inside my door
Comments
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Yep, soul version sounds good to me.
Not sure the metaphor about the weather is clear. I can't work out if he's hoping for sun or rain, or how they represent his current feelings and state of mind.
"There will never be rain inside my window". Why would anyone want there to be? Or is he saying he is resilient against rain?
There's rain, ice, sun, wind, dust and desert. I have no idea which ones matter.
But as always, just one view.
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the Soul version sounds really cool. the lyrics fit well into that genre.
i agree with RaindDayMan the weather metaphor is ambiguous. when she is gone its like having all the bad weather? Perhaps The rain is beating against his door, trying to get in but it wont, as long as he holds to the hope she will return?
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Dosent make sense , rain is never in your window . But love a good rain hook , they never get old
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