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good song, bad behavior. 😱
Nice story telling, it kept moving forward the whole song.
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it sounds good. minor tweak to consider. "It's all I can do to fake it from day to day" ==> all i can do is fake it from day to day
or something similar. the "it's" seems out of place to me.
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great song, love the beat/ rhythm. Chorus fits well with the "yeah right" backing vocal.
Nailed it🔥💪
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this is cool, love the 80s rock. Story is tight and clear. sounds good totally fits the genre.
couple small nit picks: "someday you'll make a good wife" maybe but only if your Richard Gere. 😁
the "knows how to care when you're on you…
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i like the hook, and the chorus sounds good too.
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This is really cool. Very cinematic I was listening but felt like I was watching a movie scene. I like the perspective that he has to choose the lesser of 2 evils. i'll have to come back and listen to this some more.
one tweak suggestion:…
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cool story. But, why didn't you just use your cell phone to get a Uber? 😂
I like that each section ends on kind of a funny note. The first one "pee" made me LOL, wasn't expecting it.
Sounds a little bit like something you would see i…
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i agree, melody is very nice.
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yeah New Normal, total BS. Just someone telling you that its never gong to be as good as it was before, so just get used to it.
cool song again.
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Thanks
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ok, I re-worked this one. let me know if this is hitting better now.
-Thx
https://suno.com/s/voMqiAJeO2IAHG9w
(mmmm)
[Verse 1]
The Wild…
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Haha, like the Porno…
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I like the opposing views on a lot of the lines like he is arguing with his conscience. it might be cool to push that on all of them.
Whiskey don’t give a damn about me. -- Whiskey never let me down.
Whiskey don’t have no sympathy. -…
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cool take.
"Trade our fire just to not be cold"
we're all sheep. Trade in freedom for convenience every time.
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ha thats good. I did…
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cool line - "Till death do you part ain’t poetry
It’s a contract signed in minor keys"
the ending was a funny twist.
yeah, all these song will live forever on the internet. 😎
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Nice song.
Verse 4 well written.
i like this line too "And truth is understanding and
Sometimes it's hard to find".
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yup, actions have consequences.
catchy melody.
Take this as a complement: I could see this working on a kids TV program. officer Joe teaching kids how to be good citizens or something like that.
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haha, thanks for the shout out 😉
Sounds like Black Flag and the Misfits did a team up. Its 3 hours past my bed time and I had to listen to it again.
sooo good. 🔥
some people say vinyl sounds the best, but this re-recorded on a …
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here's a slightly updated version. Adjusted 1st verse a little and some other small parts. I thought it would improve the story. https://suno.com/s/jeWlgr0L44uzxA3w…
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Both those turned ou…
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This sounds fantastic! Love the "Unplugged" Rock ballad sound.
The only very minor change I would maybe consider is: change to 'But' + drop And ==> But, I ain't no devil,....
Verse 2 is money. all the contrasting imagery/concepts. The rappy delivery brings it all together. Then change gears in the pre chorus at the perfect time.
You Rebel.
good song, i like it.
DK was one of my fir…
I think you nailed this. Sounds great. 👍️
If this were a music video it would go viral. 🤠
'Kills damn near everybody, saves one boat owner' - referring to Noah as a boat owner made me laugh. 😆
yeah Elisha got mad when kids called him "baldy" then 2 bear came and ripped them up. pretty gnarly. The saying, you don't have to out r…
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