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At first, I thought it was about a close personal friend, but V3 and the bridge made it seem like it’s referencing a historical figure. Maybe it’s both, somehow? Or maybe neither haha. The lyrics themselves do sound very nice. And the melody is real…
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Wow, so catchy, especially the chorus, a great match of lyrics and backing track! And of course, we have the trademark Renee woo oohs :). Overall, a lot of fun to listen to 👍
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Pretty cool song! I always love that blues progression when I hear it. It’s so simple but man there’s just something magic about it. Lyrics are appropriately affectionate. That truck’s seen better days, but she ain’t done yet.
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You know, it’s actually been so long since I’ve heard a song from you. I love these lyrics so much. They have this sort of mysterious, sultry vibe to them. The chords you put with it also help to set that mood. It’s almost trance-like. As Tom said, …
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Thanks @ElvisNash, glad you felt like it captured the era!
And thanks to you, RDM. Yeah, the AI did its thing pretty well this time haha. I haven’t always gotten this lucky, but it’s been a lot of fun regardless. Especially writing lyric… -
Thanks Sid, really appreciate that! I got really lucky on this one that it all just fell into place with the vocals, instrumental, and everything.
I’ll probably have to do that myself because a lot of my attempts end up with the song go… -
It’s a good song. Like Bhengen said, very catchy. I’m not religious myself but the lyrics are good. I like how it doesn’t just end with the big D throwing a tantrum and stomping off, but still being confident that some day, he’ll manage to tempt you…
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Nice lyrics Renee, it’s a sentiment that’s been expressed many times in many different ways, but your sincere delivery makes it work.
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Hey Tom, nice tune. Like everyone else is saying, this sounds absolutely incredible for a Suno track. I’ve only just started playing around with it the past few days, but it’s enough to know that prompting is absolutely its own kind of skill, and it…
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Good one, Renee, catchy chords and melody, and I agree with RDM, with lyrics like this, it’s nice to have a super upbeat track so that it balances out a bit. I also love how you have those enthusiastic oohs in a lot of your songs. It’s like your tra…
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Nice lyrics Sid, really heartfelt and I think the melancholy pop arrangement fits perfectly. I love the title lyric in particular. It’s an interesting way to phrase something that’s been said so many times, and sums up the central theme so well. I a…
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I think the woo hoos work too, Renee. Yeah they’re kind of silly, but I think that’s part of the charm, they add to the playfulness of the song. I especially like the times when you hold out the hoooooo with that little vibrato haha. Great song and …
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@sidshovel Thanks Sid. I agree with you that it drags a bit with so many verses back to back. In my later attempts, I did tell it to include instrumental parts, which I think improved the flow of those songs and made them less monotonous. The one fr…
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I think what makes the chorus hit so hard is that it’s the little things that the narrator misses. Pancakes on a Wednesday. It’s the stuff you don’t normally think about, but the when that person is gone, the absence is so strongly felt. I figured t…
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You can really hear the passion in the words. Even though we don’t have a recording, I can imagine the rawness that it would be delivered with. I agree with Sid, I’d love to hear what it sounds like with music added.
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I don’t know why I was expecting a song about Shakespeare jamming out, but now I do hope to hear that song someday :p.
As for this one, yeah man, it’s solid for your first attempt. Composition wise, everything feels right. The verses ha… -
Yep, I think the images in the video actually match up perfectly with what I would’ve envisioned even without seeing it. It’s definitely got that wide open, driving out in the desert feel. That comes from the lyrics, but also from your voice and the…
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One of those songs where you can really feel the agony of each word in the lyrics. The bridge is the real kicker when we find out that while the narrator made this very heartfelt song for her, she literally just left him a short note with a frown e…
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Hey Sid, yep, I love those dream…
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@sidshovel Thanks so much for the kind words!! I have to say I’m absolutely honored to hear that you always go for my songs first when you see them. I always look for yours too since you have a knack for amazing lyrics.
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Another entrancing song from you, Mora. Like prysmatyk said, the word "if" takes center stage here. I definitely relate to these lyrics, as I'm sure most of us do. The music and lyrics have a dark, hypnotic quality and capture the feelings of reg…
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Wow, what a sultry little tune, total Casablanca vibes, like Sid said. I can absolutely picture this in a black and white film in a jazz club scene. The combination of the lyrics from @prysmatyk and your own vocals really make the magic happen. Grea…
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Wow, what a lyric. It really captures the breadth of joy and sadness you experience within a relationship rocked by a such a tragedy, and that bridge is an absolute gut punch. Tbh I think it’s one of your best lyrical pieces yet. The music is nice a…
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That one was a lot of fun 😃 absolutely bursting with energy, and I can imagine how it would sound performed live by a band. Great tune!
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I love the groove you have going in the guitar part, it’s really toe tapping. This one had a very bluesy / roots rock type of sound, I can heard it having that sort of arrangement if a band got a hold of it.
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@ChrisPrice Hey Chris, thanks for checking it out! I've always loved how the Beatles did some jazzy songs on their …
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@prysmatyk we can only hope :p.
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I like this version but I have to admit I would really want to hear the more melancholy version you envisioned. I just watched Eight Men Out (which is set in the late 1910s) the other day, and was thinking while listening to this that if it was give…
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Hi Sid, these are some powerful lyrics with a universal theme, though I’m sure for UK listeners, it would hit even harder. There are some awkward phrasings here and there which I would just put down to the AI, but overall, it did a decent job. I hav…
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@prysmatyk Thanks for listening! I almost considered calling it "What am I gonna do now?" based on that line, but…
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