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Hey y’all, I saw a lot of activity and decided to see what’s up. First of all, I’m so sorry if I have misled anyone here. I did mention it at the top but I usually make it more clear, the lyrics are mine, but the vocal is from Suno. I am most de…
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@RainyDayMan The crazy thing is, I didn’t even ask for breathiness, I think Suno just did that on its own because…
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Yep. I got the 60s surf vibe right away, thought admittedly a heavier version. Maybe surf rock meets 70s rock? Either way it was super catchy. I think RDM may have a point that it’s more about the mood / vibe than the words, but I really liked the l…
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What a great title, got me hooked right away. Love your style, it always rocks in that old school way and is just a fun listen. Plus those lyrics just get your attention.
Also, more of a side note, but what a shame that lost and ghost d… -
Wow, that’s great! Love how it has a bit of a 70s pop vibe. It’s true that it wouldn’t make it commercially viable as RDM said, but I think it sounds way better than commercial stuff anyway. Honestly I can’t find anything wrong with it. It’s just a …
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Somehow, whether they’re simple or complex, your lyrics always manage to be so meaningful. Hallways can definitely be scary in the right situation. This song and video just makes me want to explore them though haha.
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I’m sorry I made you feel that way, Tom. I’ve always appreciated your music and I would definitely appreciate this one, but I understand.
Life just gets hectic, you know. I’ve got so much going on that I didn’t even have time to make an… -
Hey Tom. Seems like the song is no longer available, which is a shame because based on the lyrics I would definitely want to hear it. I like the changing choruses, makes it feel like more of an unraveling story, like those classic singer-songwriter …
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I love how it starts out so cute and sweet, and then that last verse hits, and like RDM said, it fits perfectly with the message. The contrast of those happy chords and such a serious topic makes it land even harder. There’s something about the cont…
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To build on what RDM said, I feel like the heavy syncopation really makes you pay attention to each little detail, it keeps ears from getting complacent. It also kind of reflects the chaos and turmoil of getting sick. I enjoyed that a lot, and I hop…
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Be careful Elvis or you might accidentally make the devil seem cooler with all that outlaw stuff LOL. But seriously though, it’s great. There’s something so human about songs with conflicts like that. Love the vocals.
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Nice one Tex. I love the internal rhyming and flow of the lyrics. It really adds to the bounciness of the song. I enjoyed that.
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Nice one, Elvis. I love to hear new stuff that just has the classic sound, not over produced or anything. Everything sounds lovely, and the lyrics are really clever. I liked it 👍
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Yeah, I did think that was cool how it goes from a typical blues tune to suddenly having higher aspirations in the chorus. It’s a cool little twist on both genres. I can hear it with a band though I would probably still want to keep it as a light ar…
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Entrancing as always Mora. You always find ways to push the limits with your unique style. It’s the kind of music that makes you sit down and really think.
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Okay so I made a comment on the original lyrics post before seeing that someone had already recorded a version, and yeah, I definitely could see why some of the words needed to be moved around and rearranged. Most of it worked just fine though, a…
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@RainyDayMan Thanks! It's funny because I've done like 9 or 10 in this style since I posted this, and I'm not eve…
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I'll also look forward to the version with music, as I felt like at some places, the lyrical rhythm might get a bit awkward, but then again, I'm not able to hear the same rhythm you have in mind, so that's why I'm excited to see how you arrange t…
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I don't know too much about EDM as I don't really listen to that genre. It sounds right to me, has that ethereal, dreamy vibe. I agree with the others that the ending is a bit awkward as it kind of just fades out randomly. I thought the rest was …
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Well I didn't get to hear the previous versions, but I definitely think RDM's chord suggestions helped as it sounds very melancholy and reflective, exactly how you'd want it to be for something this personal. Setting aside my own personal views o…
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Great lyrics, man. Lots of really cool wordplay and well...its true, isn't it? Jealousy, the ultimate double edged sword. AI did a good job with the music. Really captured the gritty sound as RDM pointed out.
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Thanks @ElvisNash and @guyetrep, glad y’all liked it :)
@TammyB My dad was a big fan of the Beatles and doo-wop, some of my earliest musical memories are hearing “I Want to Hold Your Hand” in his car when he would pick me up from pre-K. … -
@RainyDayMan Thanks RDM. You know, I did get a kind of 62-63 vibe from this, almost more like a song the Beatles would’ve covered on an early album, or even for a live at the BBC performance. I don’t know why, but it just gives me that vibe. Glad yo…
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Thanks for stopping by, bhengen. I know it’s not gonna work for everyone, but I’m at peace with that, and I’m not really interested in writing current tbh. I respect those who find fulfillment in that style, but it’s not for me, so I leave the exper…
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“and is that what I've been doing alone all these years, "squandering years". Dang. Never saw it quite that way. I'd better get a move on, hey?“
Nah, you’re good Renee :p. There’s a time for everyone, at least that’s what I’m hoping. Wit… -
It's a beautiful song, Toney, your love for her shines through so clearly in these lyrics, and while she may no longer be here, I know she would be so happy with this. I agree with RDM, the lyrics should be the star here, so I might lower the ver…
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Oh nice, I remember hearing this elsewhere and 100% expecting it to be a drug dealer at the end haha, so you're not alone there in Got A Friend Comment by BeatlesFan64 June 2025
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I agree with bhengen, the vocals sound crystal clear, through my Mac speakers anyway. I love the lyrics, they are sweet, and your vocal delivery totally sells it. The one thing I might've liked to see was a rhythm change in the pre-chorus or chor…
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Yep, at the end of the day we are all people and need to live and love together as human beings, regardless of our differences. I will say that in my opinion, one of the two sides embraces this much more than the other (I won't say which as I don…
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It's one of those songs that really makes you think. Even though the message on the surface seems simple, the words really pique your interest and make me want to know more. I found myself wondering who "you" is in the story, what they are to the…
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