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Virtue and Vice - Beat it up
So I've been working on this a little since I woke this morning at an ungodly hour. I have some ideas on modifying the wording to be less mystical and more modern such as the first verse shifting to … (View Post)1 -
Re: Athila
So you in this but as mentioned above missing the you in it. I could feel the lack of your emotional connection to the words as I listened. I hope to hear a revised version with your emotional punch … (View Post)1 -
Re: If
Yes if. . . I carry quite a few ifs. I enjoyed the lyrics and how it forces the question if, front and center. No elliquence or colorful dressing, just IF. The music is a good foundation for Thule ly… (View Post)1 -
The Bard - Comments Requested
As many of you know I am a recent member and new to the songwriting arena. I am trying my best to absorb all the information, suggestions and anything I can get my hands on to become a lyricist. Earl… (View Post)1 -
Re: Sweet Little Sin
@BeatlesFan64 It was in her delivery Tommy, words are flat without the vocal acuity to breath life into em. Again, thank you so much for performing this @Plain_Jane (View Post)1
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