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Re: Murder Blues
Nice blues song - I think some very minor lyrical adjustments - Example: Well there’s violence in the alleys And there’s drug deals in the street May read better as: And there's dealers in the street… (View Post)1 -
Re: The Ghost
I like the beat on this - it really drives the song. I wonder if the modern term "influencer" feels out of place in a song about ghosts? It was the only lyrics that jarred me out of my tran… (View Post)1 -
Re: What D'You Think of That?
I love this hook as well - my only issue is with final verse the line "a cheeky cow" probably could be rethought - I do like the "fact or fiction" line is a great way to close the… (View Post)1 -
Sympathy
Again file this under "this is an oldie where I come from" - I have had this song bouncing around since at least 1988. But given that it's a Supremes-style female vocal no way I could even … (View Post)1 -
Re: Nothing remains the same in memory except the taste of tears
This is a trip in the best way - great song. I would almost start the song with the "tears tears tears" hook (View Post)1
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