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Re: My Defense
I really like these lyrics. especially this line - I don’t want to know, what I don’t know, that's brilliant. Your prompt is excellent; it really brings out the lyrics. Why not make the 2nd bridge an… (View Post)1 -
Re: I had to go
that's the point of the site. (View Post)1 -
Re: I told you Could Fly
I think if you dropped Life! from the intro, the intro would make more of a statement. The music really fits the lyrics (View Post)1 -
Re: The trash
I always find it amazing how you can say so much with so few words. Hopefully this ended with a positive outcome. (View Post)1 -
Re: What D'You Think of That?
You seem to be meandering. In verse 4, what do you mean by “what’s the point of that”? Point of what? Also, why doesn’t she get peace from the thought police? And how does “the world’s turned to crap… (View Post)2
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