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Solid tune. Adding some cool rattle effects during the chorus would be awesome! Thanks for sharing!
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Hi!! Thanks for listenin…
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With your humour, I thought the song title would mean she was on the toilet/loo. Or maybe that's what you did mean haha. I dig your songs. Thanks for sharing
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Phooey to social media and streaming. Hit the open mics in your town. Find out if people actually like your songs. It's not that hard to write a song. But can you be memorable and have something to say. No one cares about your songs when they can…
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Thanks for listening. Ye…
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Thanks CCB, I appreciate…
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Sorry but those are not abstract lyrics. They just repeat the same theme over and over again. There is no ambiguity here. I am just suggesting lyrics that have some type of journey could help your song.
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I like the melody, it is good. I like the instrumentation. However I totally thought this was the same song as the Enchantress one you posted. Like that one, I get lost in the structure. As a listener I really want definite sections that tell me …
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Thanks for sharing. Like your other songs, well organized, good production and awesome singing. Choosing a well known title will always bring up comparisons so up to you but as EN mentioned, a song title cannot be copyrighted. I agree with Owen (…
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Not sure how I hear any "rapping" here but nice try I guess haha. I think the words aren't strong enough yet, allow the listener to understand the hypocrisy or at least be part of it so maybe go a bit deeper. Also be careful with rhymes that just…
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Woah there, I may resemble that remark haha. There is nothing wrong about abstractness if the artist/musician wants it. If the viewer/listener does not find any coherence or meaning they are allowed to move on. I have come to this forum as a song…
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Nice to hear your songs. Always tasteful and to the point. Glad you are still moderating here. I am looking forward sharing some of my new songs here.
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Cool stuff. You got a sound. I like it!
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