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Well what came out is all about the sound, though it does feel like a good fit to the lyric.
But in terms of nonsense lyrics, I was listening to "Blinded by the light" yesterday. The lyric there is just for rhymes, but what a song!
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Good lyric and came out well! Like it a lot. My only suggestion would be in the chorus, I think
Prayin’ for mercy but hell don’t care
might sound better, but you'd need to find an alternate line 2 then as well.
Lyric is solid, and that certainly makes it easier for tools like Suno to do their job. Makes for an easy listen!
I've come across Puddles before. As you say, great voice, and quite a stage presence too! Good luck to him!
Well, I'm no kid, but even I've heard of Mr Rogers, though we never saw him here in Australia.
Bitter edge to this that I think will be very popular. Strong lyric. The music is good, though I'd like it to build more as the song progresses, …
All about the sound for me in this one. Nothing wrong with the lyric, but it's secondary, and that's just fine.
And the sound works great! I don't know the genre, but I love the bassline and the vocal harmonies. And the synth and drums are …
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This is a good song Elvis. I think you're communicating really effectively what depression is like. I love that opening line:
I wake up with the sunrise, but I’m still in the night
I hope you heal soon. This real…
I can't say I actually enjoyed this one, but I do think there's an edge to the music that's a good fit to the lyric.
And I liked these lines:
I eat so I don't smoke
I smoke so I don`t eat
Per…
Don't think I ever saw Star Blazers, but I can see why it appeals to you!
Excellent lyric! Really like that, and Suno has done a great job with it.
Let's hope it gets out there. Good message.
Deserves to be used on a cartoon in this genre. Delightfully kitsch!
The music is the highlight for me, that sounds really tight.
The lyric is fine, but a tad generic. But I feel like the emphasis is on the sound anyway in this song, and there it's strong.
Gives me a vampire vibe! That dark mood to the music makes a love song into something else!
Love the combo! That's a wild ride! Almost a soundscape.
Really creative and interesting.
I think it works. I quite like the faster verses. Nice contrast with the the chorus.
I don't know Jelly Roll, but it's obviously a person, so anyone can look it up if they need to!
Cool song regardless!
Can you get Suno just to change that one phrase without redoing the whole song? I'm not saying you should - that's up to you. But I have a feeling that functionality exists now.
Very theatrical. I can imagine this playing in a movie soundtrack as the heroes step inside a building drawing guns for a shoot out - all in slow motion.
Definitely works in this style.
Beautiful words! And the song came out really nicely as well. It's beautiful to listen to.
My only suggestion is not to use "Val Kilmer" in the lyric. Just say "My last request" as if from his perspective. Keep the title and people will wor…
Good song!
My favorite lines:
Don't know what came over me.
A fool in love can hardly see
followed by the one word I think you should change: "victimized", I think that's too strong, and borders on se…
Both sound good to me, but I'm leaning towards the pop version as well.
Well I can't argue with this one!
Lovely guitar work! And a solid track all round.
Really enjoyed that. :)
I particularly like that opening verse. Got a really strong flow to it.
As a suggestion, I think "loose parts" is a little weaker than the rest, maybe you could try:
That seals the cut, the bruised
Parts
Sounds really good Elvis. I really like the rhyming in it. Good vibe to it.
Not sure what it's about, but I can enjoy listening to it regardless!
"I’d rather be alone and by myself
Than to be alone, while being with someone else"
Yeah, that hits hard. Wonderful lines.
And a great melody and sound to go with it.
Good st…
This one is beyond me in terms of meaning I'm afraid, but I like how it came out in Suno.
It certainly has a mood and vibe though.
Yep, that version of V3 will work just fine.
I think the perspective switch is more of a songwriting issue than an English issue, maybe that's why your daughter didn't pick up on it.
Lyric for those who like to read and listen:
[Verse]
The clock spins fast but the days move slow
A fire burns where the shadows grow
I touched the edge and it cut me deep
But I can't stop
I can't sleep
Very interesting! I think the marriage of lyric and music is very strong on this one.
Got a new age feel, and I don't mean anything negative by that. Just the topic as a whole. Could be an audience?
Not a narrative, a collection of ab…
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