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Hey Sid,
Like others, I love some of the phrases - very funny. I was a bit confused about what the rocking horse droppings actually referred to, though 🤔
As Chris says, some slight problems with the AI phrasing, particularly "food kit…
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Another catchy one, Renee. You're using those backing tracks to great effect! I love the line about the elephants and donkeys sinking the same boat LOL. Like many great metaphors, it's a wonderful image when you imagine it literally for a moment.…
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Wow, you can certainly sing! Wonderfully jazzy feel with those chord progressions. Not usually my cup of tea, but I have to say I'm impressed.
The lyric didn't grab me immediately as far as meaning is concerned. But then again, maybe it doe…
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Well, that's telling it like it is. Hard to pull off, but I think you did :)
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Great visuals, as always, and Marcus creates a brilliant musical canvas for you to paint on. I really like the lyric too. Very poetic, but accessible. I agree that the words are a bit hard to pick out. I don't think it would interfere with the vi…
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This has a nice anthemic feel to it. I really like the chorus, the way your voice goes up in the middle of "war" in the second line and the way the third line changes up the repetitive pattern. When I saw it was over 5 minutes long, I thought I w…
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Sorry to hear of your troubles, Mora. I hope life treats you better going forward. So nice to see you back.
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Good combination of the music to the great lyric. I found myself paying attention to the story all the way through. It's a bit corny in a good way and very visual.
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That's an interestin…
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Beautiful! Marcus' music is very cinematic and it creates a tension like a taut string that stretches through the whole video. I love the visuals too, as always, especially that bit at the end when we are looking at you creating the video. Circle…
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@MoraAmaroLaLoba Great to hear from you! I hope you are doing well. I was just in your part of the world…
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Fun song with a good hook that gets a lot of repetition. You could pitch this. It ticks a lot of boxes when it comes to country. I like the twist at the end.
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@DullRoar "A.I. reminds me of cross-country skiing. Toil away forever getting out to a favourite ice-fishing sp…
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A nice sound. Suno does a good job. I didn't think I was going to like this as much as I do until the braces line. Goose bumps moment.
I wonder if it wouldn't be improved by changing up the final chorus. After all, her day has come. She's n…
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@ChrisPrice nice to hear from you. I hope you're doing well. Thanks for listening and the kind words.
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I don't know if it's your delivery, but the melody is kind of elusive. I listened a second time and got my mind around it😊. Although some might like a melody they can grasp immediately, it's not a bad thing in my book.
The lyric is also elu…
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You really are having fun with these backing tracks! Reggae - why not? Sounds good. Like RDM, I like the way you sing ri-i-ise.
Lyrically, "Rise like the tides" is a good hook, and it certainly gets a lot of repetition. If I actually think …
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I think it would maybe sound better if you swapped things around and started the verse with the minor chord and the chorus on the major chord.🤔
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Bit of an off the wall observation, but this kind of working song, with the rhythmic clapping took me back to some old Gaelic waulking songs I remember hearing in my childhood. Waulking was the process of beating wool to soften it before weaving …
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I think some might be a little confused here. What the headline posted by @bhengen says has nothing to do with artist…
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Nice! I like the sing-along chorus. It's very similar to the verse, but that doesn't seem to matter. Can't argue with the sentiment of the lyric either.
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Thanks @HummerWisdom. Glad that you enjoyed it. I've been called a genius and regal in the space of 24 hour…
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Great sound, which I guess is to be expected 😀. It's a well-worn subject, but the hook is effective, and good use of assonance in places:
Felt skin so satin smooth.
When I kissed her lips so tender
Good song, Carroll! Glad you …
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All good points, especially regarding the quality of words. Too many lyricists ignore the possibilities of sound and think only in terms of meaning. Rhyme, internal rhyme, alliteration, assonance - so much fun to be had for both the writer and th…
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I love what you're doing with these backing tracks. They really suit your voice and style. This is great fun.
You have a few phrasing problems, notably this part:
All I got is a stack ‘a bills
Keepin’ a roof all that matters to …
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Have you listened to the lyrics of most pop songs over the last few decades? 🙄It’s like they don’t matter. But I take your point. To those of us who care, the lyric is an equal partner with the melody. I almost always write the melody before any con…
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