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Unusual choice of singer. I don't really think it works when allotments are such a British concept. I don't think they're a thing over here. In fact, you might need to explain the concept for your American friends here. You might want to give it …
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I really like the video. The visuals pulled me in even more than others I've seen from you.
The lyric has all your usual elusive poetic qualities. I didn't expect the musical accompaniment. I expected something more gentle. It's almost dist…
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I love the lyric. Some great lines, including the one Owen pointed out. I also love:
Time has marched right over me
At first, I wasn't too keen on the lines that follow that one.
I’m a shell of who I used to be…
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Nice, sad song. I agree with Owen that it would benefit a bit from a little more variation, either in a greater contrast between verse and chorus or a build in intensity.
Using Alice in Wonderland is a great idea, hinting at the "second chi…
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Very loose and natural sound. I like that. There's a melody there, even though it gets a bit lost sometimes in the delivery. Unusual to have such an abstract lyric in such a bluesy song. Blues is usually a very direct medium.
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@arnabs Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for listening.
Hi Mora. It's my dau…
One of the better takes I have seen/heard on the subject, mostly because the message is presented so simply. "AI, May I" is a great hook. In a way, it's a pity it only appears at the end, although I understand why. Maybe you could add a short out…
You have a great voice. You should let it loose on something more emotional and immediate, less intellectual, like a love song. That voice could really work some magic with material like that! (Of course, you might have such songs that you have n…
This song is very silly indeed. Nothing wrong with a little nonsense every now and then 😄
Another great video, Mora. I agree with Sid, that the vocal could be turned up a bit, especially in the second half of the song.
I particularly like this lyric. Very poetic without being obscure.
I got the gist of what the song was about, although my first thought was that it was infidelity that had been found out.
It's a nice song. Maybe worth taking further production-wise? Do you use any tools like EQ and compression. I can't hel…
Hey Tom. The mistake with moot is that people use it to mean unimportant or irrelevant. That’s the way you seem to have used it here. If you look at the definitions you provided, you’ll see what I mean. I don’t think you mean to say that the crew di…Well, I have a problem with "moot" most times I hear it used, because it's usually used wrongly, probably because it sounds like "mute." Looks like you have fallen into that trap, but a pedantic old fool like me might be the only kind of listener…
Hey Sid,
Like others, I love some of the phrases - very funny. I was a bit confused about what the rocking horse droppings actually referred to, though 🤔
As Chris says, some slight problems with the AI phrasing, particularly "food kit…
Another catchy one, Renee. You're using those backing tracks to great effect! I love the line about the elephants and donkeys sinking the same boat LOL. Like many great metaphors, it's a wonderful image when you imagine it literally for a moment.…
Wow, you can certainly sing! Wonderfully jazzy feel with those chord progressions. Not usually my cup of tea, but I have to say I'm impressed.
The lyric didn't grab me immediately as far as meaning is concerned. But then again, maybe it doe…
Well, that's telling it like it is. Hard to pull off, but I think you did :)
Great visuals, as always, and Marcus creates a brilliant musical canvas for you to paint on. I really like the lyric too. Very poetic, but accessible. I agree that the words are a bit hard to pick out. I don't think it would interfere with the vi…
This has a nice anthemic feel to it. I really like the chorus, the way your voice goes up in the middle of "war" in the second line and the way the third line changes up the repetitive pattern. When I saw it was over 5 minutes long, I thought I w…
Sorry to hear of your troubles, Mora. I hope life treats you better going forward. So nice to see you back.Good combination of the music to the great lyric. I found myself paying attention to the story all the way through. It's a bit corny in a good way and very visual.
That's an interestin…
Beautiful! Marcus' music is very cinematic and it creates a tension like a taut string that stretches through the whole video. I love the visuals too, as always, especially that bit at the end when we are looking at you creating the video. Circle…
@MoraAmaroLaLoba Great to hear from you! I hope you are doing well. I was just in your part of the world…
Fun song with a good hook that gets a lot of repetition. You could pitch this. It ticks a lot of boxes when it comes to country. I like the twist at the end.
@DullRoar "A.I. reminds me of cross-country skiing. Toil away forever getting out to a favourite ice-fishing sp…
A nice sound. Suno does a good job. I didn't think I was going to like this as much as I do until the braces line. Goose bumps moment.
I wonder if it wouldn't be improved by changing up the final chorus. After all, her day has come. She's n…
@sidshovel Thanks for the kind words. Glad you enjoyed the song and the back story.
in Every Love Song I Ever Wrote Comment by OnlyGavin June 23
@ChrisPrice nice to hear from you. I hope you're doing well. Thanks for listening and the kind words.
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