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@bhengen Not over here, anyway. Pretty standard on the other side of the pond :)
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Nah, I like humans. Some of them, anyway. Band In A Box is fun though. Like having a band who never need to stop for bathroom breaks or turn up late because they got smashed the night before. But your video has convinced me that what Rob needs is…
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I know you said I'm not allowed to enjoy this but is it OK if I say that I did? Because I did 😄 The AI does a good job with the melody. I'm not sure that I would be quite as totally cynical, but I get what you're saying and there are bound to be …
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if it's just a case of adding bass and drums, Band In A Box might work for you. It could lay down those tracks and you play over them.
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Thanks @RainyDayMan. I agree that the violin fits very nicely in there.
@TammyB @BeatlesFan64 @ChrisPrice - thanks for the kind words. Glad that the feeling that went into the song came through 😊 -
I like where this is going. Melodyne could be your friend here, both for pitch correction and adding harmonies- I agree those are needed in the chorus. A choral effect building through the song would be a great way to go.
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Definitely easier to make out the lyrics here. I agree with everything the others have said here. Do you play bass? That would be a good addition.
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Great rock sound. The story in the lyrics is simple enough for the listener to follow without having to work - important in a rock song, I think🙂
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I enjoyed this. The visuals are so vivid. I can picture Grandma - someone I'd better not cross. I got what you were saying with "Blondes in Qipao's." You say it all with one image and three words. Nice! That's what songwriting should do.
Th…
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I really like this. Nice boppy tune that takes me back to a previous era. Nice clean production too. I suppose you could replace the letter with a text if you wanted to make it relevant to today. That might be a fun contrast of style and content.…
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For some reason, the site won't let me play this song 😒
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I'm like Chris. I really just use SoundCloud as a place to park songs for feedback at a place like this. At some point, I deem the songs finished and, if I like them enough, put them out on the streaming services like Spotify either as part of an…
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An interesting lyric and rousing music.👍️ I'm not familiar with Dorico. I'll have to check it out. Totally agree with everything you say about writing your own melodies.
The reference to Icarus is a good one - the longing to fly that comes …
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I don't see myself using it. I just write for fun, but half of the fun of writing songs is coming up with the melody. The lyric influences the melody and vice versa. I simply can't imagine writing one without the other. I say this as a lousy musi…
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Knock 'em dead, Owen!
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Nice slice of life song. Vivid. I like it. Have you thought of adding some traffic sound effects? Easy to do with free clips to be found on the web.
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Not sure that Suno really does justice to this. Maybe I'm just jaded from all the AI, but it seems to upbeat for the depressing subject. Some good lines in there, as always.
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I like the lush strings effect from the keyboard. I'm afraid I have to agree that the chorus is a little repetitive.
I don't know that anyone would say that a gentle breeze is brewing. A storm brews, but not a breeze. How about, "There's a …
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The free version of SoundCloud is OK, but you can't replace sound files. So, if you upload something and get some feedback that persuades you to change something, you can't. You have to delete the track and upload it again, meaning it will have a…
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Hey, I'm not suggesting abandoning the rhyme - just finding a better one that says more and doesn't seem forced :)
Not every line in every song has to rhyme, but I'm one of those old-fashioned types who thinks it's almost always better when…
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This is basically a good lyric imo. It puts us inside your (or the singer's) head. I felt like I was thinking along with her. It has an honesty and an intimacy that drew me in. Not many lyrics do that.
There are a couple of lines that I'm n…
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@sidshovel Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it so much. You've encouraged me to keep working on it ☺️
Wow, that was not the musical treatment I expected when I read the lyric. It works for me, though. "I'm a proud mama" is a nice hook. That's the line I remember after listening. Simple lines are often the best, especially when expressing an emoti…
Well worth doing jus…
Well, that was fun. very catchy and some amusing lines. Not sure where the gerbil comes from 🤔.
Well done, Owen, I think anyone, regardless of their political views can appreciate that it's a well written song. A lot of interesting metaphors. The simple musical treatment is a strength, in my opinion. This feels more like folk than country, …
It's a really fun melody - well done Suno! 😀
And well done to you too. I mostly like the lyric. For me some of the liberties with grammar don't quite come off, but most of them do. One I would definitely change is in the first line. As writ…
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