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All good points, but the other thing is to listen in general. To good writers, good artists, good songs, it's still very much ..crap in crap out, it just sounds really good.
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Hi thanks, unfortunately all Rock music is a throwback, it's simply missing in today's equation . When I redo these myself I hope to sound modern, or at least different.
I think the singer is an ai model of lou Graham from foreignor.
Just revised this, glad I did...
https://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=15084489This is good. I especially like the chorus, the space and timing coming out of the verses is perfect.
I think some of the phrasing could be better in the verses some of lines don't match the meter of original verse, and it loses the att…I took it downHaha@ franswa. .
I took this one down, I'll probably revisit it later on its more of a punk rock idea than anything else.
But I guarantee we've all already told at least one lie already today.
We do it for many…I've done many songs with ai using my lyrics, mostly lyrics that were already full songs. I've never felt ai tune was clearly better than my own
Where it destroys me is in the production, arrangement which is super important how you frame the…Bob Dylan and Neil Young have instantly identifiable voices. Many impersonators do them cause of that.
And Dylan's a much better singer than he gets credit for. Always on pitch before pitch correction.
You dont need suno any …I honestly don't think anybody uses anybody's Suggestions lol. Not even for copyright reasons but for ego.
I think critiques are a cumulative thing. You might point out something that's a weakness, that I can then try to improve on
Hi, nice old school country song
I think parents do this to kids inadvertently not even needing to say it.
Like the first verse, I didn't think the following verses were as good.
The key might be too low to be ex…@Arts_Tunes
Thanks, well Bobby wasn't an ace jump roper, they were in grade school. but he got INVOLVED and managed to do it. Singer is not admiring his Jump roping skills, he's admiring his guts to do it, get involved be part of it, a…@RainyDayMan thanks, yes I agree very authentic sounding. I kind of self inspect that as I'm doing it. The ones that don't sound convincing enough I usually toss
@IronKnee I haven't started covering my stuff. I don't even use suno yet, …I think you should change the hook too. It's a powerful chorus, 6/8 time in the verses country waltz feel, interesting
I think words like incarcerated with memories are too clumsy for this delicate song.
Shackled by feelings…@MoraAmaroLaLoba , wow! Thank you I literally couldn't have said that myself.
Thanks for the kind words, you are very good at giving a review, should do it as vocation.
Hope I never get a bad review done so well!Not really a fan of the other two guys, but I am of Chalmers. chalmers had a Rock band u know, he was the singer and they had songs about about consciousness lol
There's a guy named Donald Hoffman who will blow your mind, and has alread…Internal stuff is hard to get across. I like this part a lot...
I still see divine
I see this shooting star
Blink in time
Of all my other angels I had
The only thing that made me gasp
That should be your cho…Thanks @RainyDayMan . It wouldn't let me post the whole lyric. I did it in pieces final piece was first verse and it gave error
It's happened a few times I think if it takes too much space it won't let you.
I agree Spanish..…Love me in Spanish
if the words aint right
baby dont panic,
I understand you
Oh yes I do
Si Senorita,
all you gotta do
is smile muy bonita
You got my whole heart
right from the start
love m…@MoraAmaroLaLoba
Thanks so much! I didn't do any mixing but glad you enjoyed
Great review!Thanks, I thought it sounded like the BeatlesTighten up those lyricsGuitars are funny, it can be in tune for one chord and not another, still drives me crazy"the road past thoughts of you
is closed and all but gone."
Great line, and it's a great lyric overall I admire how you write so laid back and uncontrived.
In this one I think the melody could be better. And guitar i…@RainyDayMan great review, yesi can extend it, but ai tends to go long, I didn't want listeners ( all 2) forgetting what the song was because of a minute of noodling at end. One big weakness ai has is it doesn't khow when to shut up.
I'…As Dom said it@IronKnee . I think ai at least with suno is primed to go for polished productions after all, they care about one thing, making money. So make anybody sound like a super star, that's how you keep the gravy train coming
But when you en…
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