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Great song and performance! Nice vocals also!
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Great song, Renee. I really like the 3rd verse. Vocals sounding good!
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Wow, Bill, Great write. I was caregiver for both my mom and dad. both had Alzheimer's. So, this really hits home with me. Thanks for sharing
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Great track Gavin, Love the melody. and the story the lyrics tell!
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Great lyrics Renee. Kind of reminds me of Zager and Evans "In the Year 2525" only it's happening a lot sooner than they predicted.
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Love this RC! Slide sounding good! "On the way to I don't know where" great line!
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Love this song, Renee! It's got an old school Kris Kristofferson feel! And, even though the genre is entirely different it reminds me of Skynyrd's "Things Going On"
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@RCJames,Thank You, RC!
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@sidshovel Thanks for listening and commenting. Glad you like it!
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@RainyDayMan Thanks for listening Owen and the suggestions. I didn't spend much time on mixing and the guitar de…
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@HummerWisdom Thanks Very much Renee, for listening and your kind comment!
This is you at your best, Renee. Just you and your guitar and a song from the heart.
Awesome demo, Elvis! I love the vocals. The acoustic guitar outro is a nice finishing touch.
Hey Tammy! Love these lyrics! I know you made your brother proud! esp. love the chorus and outro.
"He's known around town as Jesse James" I like that!
Nice lyrics, Bill. Love the outro. That piano!!
Hey Renee, You didn't post soundcloud link. here it is
Stream THIS CAN'T BE HEAVEN by Renee La Chapelle | Listen online for free on SoundClo…
Hey Owen, sum-guns is a clean way of saying sons of b's. Glad you like it and it was really fun
Outstanding lyrics Sid! really like the bridge and the outro also. You're very good at this. Keep it up!
Cool lyrics Kala. Good meter, and the lyrics flow very well. You need another line in the 2nd verse. Maybe," you always say I'm the one that's wrong " or something like that. Owen has some good points.
Great song Sid. Love this song! Being raised in a small southern town in North Alabama, I can surely relate.
Thanks for writing this, Owen. It really hits home. Great write!
@sidshove Hey Sid! These lyrics are spot on. Pm at that age where I do what my body permits. music and vocals go…
Excellent lyrics, Carol. These are dark times we're living in. Your lyrics have a Dylan feel to them.
You tell 'em Renee!! "Under some hyped-up slogan promises to be broken". Well said.
Love this song, Gavin. Very good write. Back in my drinking days the local bars were my 2nd home. This is like the downside of the Cheers theme song.
@OnlyGavin Thank You Gavin! "I don't think I've ever heard of the key of Cmaj7." LOL! I don't know why I …
@HummerWisdom, Thaks so much Renee! "And good on you for having been aroun…
@sidshovel Thanks Sid! I just looked up "Wandering Star" on YouTube. I love that!
@RainyDayMan Thanks for your comment and recommendation. I think I will change the title to Gypsy tailwind and ch…
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