Eyes of the lonely
https://audius.co/sidshovel/eyes-of-the-lonely (right click then open link in new tab,) to open song. lyrics SS : music/vocals Ai
[verse 1]
Baby, you got me tryin', got me dyin',
deep down inside, my tears are hidin'.
You gonna leave me, cast me aside,
How you expect me, to survive.
[verse 2]
The eyes of the lonely, look away,
pain is hurtin, hurtin' every day.
But I'd take you back, to my arms,
wont let you stray, do me harm.
[chorus]
Eyes of the lonely, how they cry,
pleadin' with you, through the tears.
You leave me hangin', out to dry,
another woman, of younger years.
[verse 3]
Don't I deserve, another chance,
walk away from, this romance.
This is gonna, break my heart,
You an' me, never been apart.
[chorus]
Eyes of the lonely, how they cry,
pleadin' with you, through the tears.
You leave me hangin', out to dry,
another woman, of younger years.
[verse 4]
It don't seem fair, leave me for her,
pain an' heartache, we had our share.
I'll never make it, through a single day,
What can I do, to make you stay.
[chorus]
Eyes of the lonely, how they cry,
pleadin' with you, through the tears.
You leave me hangin', out to dry,
another woman, of younger years.
[bridge]
Holdin' on to you, my life's, holdin' on to you,
Tell me, if I let you go, what am I gonna do.
Without you, without you, who am I, gonna be
Don't go, stay with me, I'm lost, can't you see.
[final chorus]
Eyes of the lonely, how they cry,
pleadin' with you, through the tears.
You leave me hangin', out to dry,
another woman, of younger years.
[outro]
Now you've gone, I need to make my way,
I'm livin' life, gettin' by, each day by day.
I was lost at first, but now I'm gettin' stronger,
I found out, that I don't need you any longer.
Comments
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You got me wantin' to try that A.I. Robot so BAD, Sid . . . dang, what a beautiful song! As you know by now I'm much better with words than music and I'm certainly no singer nor guitar player. Dang!
And as an older lady, the 'woman of younger years' I can certainly relate to and it HURTS bad! And I really like your opening lines all the inner chimes; really catchy. And I like the strong woman outro.
Nice job writing from the opposite sex perspective, too!
And now I'm wondering. I have in the past, used backing tracks from Youtube on occasion when one fits. I'm wondering if those are A.I. generated? If so, I would've never suspected.
Renee
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Thanks Renee, Don't know how the innards of Ai work as I know zilch about music myself.
All I can tell you is that everything you hear came out of Suno Ai app. I just tell it what I'm looking for, press the button and out it comes. It's not that predictable so you may have to try 10-12 times to get what you want.
Sid
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Nice lyric leaning into the pop/funk sound which works well.
An emphasis on rhythm and rhyme and a strong result!
Eyes of the lonely, how they cry,
That's a great hook, and perfect for this kind of song.
Still got a story to it, with a resolution at the end, but written for the music to shine I suspect.
Really enjoyed that!
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