Between
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If you'd like feedback on the lyrics, please post them here on TSF.
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i’ll do that tomorrow so I don’t post 2 things in one day. Supposed to be on audio but I guess not. Still learning0
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Ok. Even if they are on the audio, I would suggest that you post the lyrics here on TSF. Some people may not follow the link to an AI generated track, but could still give you feedback on the lyric if posted here.
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Between
I don’t want to be just a name on a stone.
With the date I was born and died.
I want to sail the oceans and see the world
Be a ship on the changing tide.
Chorus
We are born we die but in between
Few will follow their heart.
We live we breathe but it’s in between
that sets a man a part.
Verse
I don’t want to be dust a broom sweeps away.
Just a cloud that goes sailing by.
I want to wake the sleeping and give them hope.
Be a star that serves as a guide.
Chorus
We are born we die but in between
Few will follow their heart.
We live we breathe but it’s in between
that sets a man a part.
Bridge
I may never do anything memorable
But I’ll die knowing I tried.
Yes I’ll die knowing I tried.
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I like the theme here, it's inspiring. "In between" doesn't lend itself to a strong visual though.
My favorite line is "Be a ship on the changing tide." I think you could write a different song just building out from that image.
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I really like the lyrics to this one. The music is strong and works with your words. I don't know that a real band would structure it quite like that. Some of the shifts are a bit strange to my ears, but the overall feel is very powerful. Would I have known this was Ai generated? I'd like to think so, but this technology is getting better all the time.
A good song Carroll.😀
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Thank Chris. I’m still new to this and I trash a lot of versions before I get an acceptable one. I’d rather work with people! Feel free to use the lyrics to do your own thing.0
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