Anytime You Need Me I Am Yours (lyrics)
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This song is intended for my forthcoming horror novel. It's one of the ballads among the 13 songs written for the book's CD. The song is about a guy falling in love with the beautiful sorceress, Hedra. I'm working on the demo now. The lyrics that mention she or her are when he's talking about Hedra to himself or perhaps to someone else about her. The parts that reference you are when he's speaking to Hedra telepathically, or perhaps to her picture. The distinction will be obvious in the video I'm planning. 😎
Anytime You Need Me I Am Yours Performed by: Joseph Spain Words and Music by: Joseph Spain Produced by: Joseph Spain © 2024 Joseph Spain song from the forthcoming horror novel "Omega's Dark: The Transference" -- Verse 1 In her beauty there's a light inside In her heart, a love to die for Wanna hold her in my arms and find What we share through what we show --Pre-chorus 1 My angel knows I need her so I need her in my life I breathe this woman day and night --Verse 2 Is she mystic, can she read my mind Does she know her love's to die for Close and wrapped inside her arms all night Whisper vows her heart adores --Pre-chorus 1 My angel knows I need her so I need her in my life I breathe this woman day and night --Chorus 1 Anytime you need me I am yours With a thought across the stars I'll find you One promise of true love our two hearts share Anytime you need me I am yours You're my heart, you are my soul, you're Heaven Our seasons do become the love we share --Verse 3 I know you love me and I feel your heart Do you sense my love within you Always miss you when we're far apart Say the words my heart adores --Pre-chorus 2 My angel knows I need her so I need her in my life Just say you love me day and night (repeat chorus 1) --Bridge I can never find the words to tell you You own me, you're my heart I claim your love forever, you're my faith Once autumn turns to winter Follow spring into your heart To endless summer days we'll always play --Chorus 2 Anytime you need me I am yours Close your eyes and think of me I'll find you One promise of true love our two hearts share Anytime you need me I am yours You're the one, you are my love, forever Our seasons do become the love we share --instrumental outro
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Very powerful piece Joseph. This must be one huge and complicated project your working on.
Novel, music lyrics and video, you are indeed multi-talented, keep it up.
Sid
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Many thanks for reading my lyrics and your kind words, Sid. I look forward to reading your next lyrics. 😀
Cheers,
Joseph
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Lots of good things here. My favorite is:
I breathe this woman day and night
I like how you use "love to die for" structurally with variations and similar lines.
I can imagine using the Pre-chorus by itself first, then into the chorus the 2nd time working well.
Our seasons do become the love we share
The do here feels slightly unnatural, though it may sound fine sung. And it isn't out of place with other formal lines like "In her beauty there's a light inside". You could consider "will" instead, but that may not be exactly what you are looking for.
I expect it will sound as good as the other tracks I've heard!
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@RainyDayMan Thank you for the review, Owen! I appreciate the kind words and your good ideas. I'm looking forward to hearing your next release. In the meantime, I'm heading over to give your latest release, Bag of Ashes, another listen! 😀
Cheers,
Joseph
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