Facts!
That Giant One - Facts! #music - YouTube
Facts!
Every year when the day is gone
A sad soul cry at night
Dropping tears of sorrows
Sad stories from the past
Some people gone too soon
Some people wanna go fast
Older bodies wanna be young
Kids brain wanna be grown
Feeling free to walk alone
Feeling sad when loves go
Billionaires wanna be happy
wokers just wanna some rest
On projects trynna make it
Not knowing the future is sad
College just wanna the cash.
Selling papers for the wall
On my life tryna understand
What they're planning right now
Yo, Get the knowledge out his head.
Dumb mind we control (2x)
Facts!
if anyone ever ask
I got the fire on my soul
At the night when get silent
Thugs cry, that's for sure
Blocboy wanna get loved
Party girls wanna a good boy
Everyone wants to be happy
While dancing to sad songs
Yo, Get the knowledge out his head
dumb mind we control. (Facts)
[bridge]
That's all just facts, you can't deny
I'm on the edge, ready to fall. (2x)
That's all just facts, you can't deny.
I'm on the edge.
[chorus]
Yo, Get the knowledge out his head.
dumb mind we control.
Comments
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Now this is a dance song. has the right cadence and lands on beat. Well done :)
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sounds good, i like the use of contrasting words.
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This one doesn't strike me as a dance track like your others. It has a strong beat, but the emphasis is on the lyric.
I think the instrument mix is a little sparse. Personally I'd rather hear some ambient synth in there to fill it out a little in addition to the synth stabs you've aleady got.
The lyric has a consistent mood to it: Melancholic, edgy.
The actual meaning feels a bit scattered to me. Billionaires, party girls, sad stories etc.
You can say these are all facts, but what are they pointing to? What's the connecting theme. I'm missing it, I don't think it's clear.
But I could just be the wrong audience for it!
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Thanks for your feedback.
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Thanks for your feedback.
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Thanks for your feedback. Yea, it isn't a dance song. Nobody is satisfied, everyone is looking for something else.
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It's a ballad , not a dance tune , All the facts in v1 , you might want to say , why we think of these facts in chorus then to continue the laundry list of facts . Very true we all want something else in life then what we have , its human nature
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