The trash
Hola, a new one, a new dark story, I think very dark at some moments, but interesting? I had a terrible fight with mix but finally I think I reached a fine result... I hope..
The vid this time is very special, dark too but accompanies so well the song!
Mora
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y1l-TSz88Tk
I do this and that
trying to keep my thoughts
from becoming crows
circling the wound
from which my sadness flows
Your voice haunts my back
throwing words sharp as knives,
lies cloaked in truth
but what good are excuses
between two lovers who have died
in the portrait you describe
Everything was ready
for your goodbye
despite my attempts to paint
a new sun in our eyes
a new landscape on our walls
You were already the hand
that was erasing our story
and as you approach the door
I'm becoming an old book
tossed in the trash.
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I always find it amazing how you can say so much with so few words. Hopefully this ended with a positive outcome.
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That video is gorgeous! It looks like a lot of work!
The mix sounds very clear to me, the vocals nice and clear without dominating.
It is a sad lyric, but I love your poetic style and this one is no exception! Thoughts becoming crows circling a wound is so vivid!
The vocal melody feels a bit narrower in range on this song. I guess that fits the darker, sadder theme, but it made it a bit less memorable afterwards for me.
But overall I still enjoyed it very much.
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Thank you.
Well, I think that happens to shy people.😎
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Hola @RainyDayMan
Out of the song, I smile when I reply to you at seeing your nick While here the sun is already preparing the oven LOL
Thank you, yes, it's a dark song and a dark video, vocals melody? I had some problems but at th end this is the result.... oughhhh
Stay well there, North? South? Mid? East, West? don't know which part of the world you are from...
Mora
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You do alot of dark songs , its in your DNA , sounds good Mora
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great lyrics, reads as a poem just on its own. great imagery and metaphor.
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Mora, I'm from Australia, specifically Victoria which is cooler and wetter than most of the country. But still, it's summer here and 30C days are common and we've had some over 40C. I've been to Spain and there are some similarities in terms of climate and weather. I know what you mean about the oven!
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Sometimes!!! but it's not something I want to be... Elvis
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ha ha , Spain seems better then US
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Ha... what a cool video. I like the music, but the video is really cool.
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haha yes, I understand, so.. summer is with you...I didn't know exactly which country you lived in... We'll be entering spring soon, but the heat is already expected, so I imagine I'll get a tan from the air this summer, without sunbathing... How awful!!
Climate change is hitting us hard. France, Italy, and Spain have suffered terrible rains, many floods, entire towns wiped out, people forced to leave their lives behind. Obviously, it's not a war, but the result...
And soon the Puerta del Sol will open and everything will start to burn... Fire and water, two terrible extremes... Well, I don't know why I'm telling you this, thanks for replying, very kind of you. If you need any Spanish food recipes, I'll make them for you, hahaha. The secret is in the olive oil and the vegetables from the gardens... Oh, and Serrano ham, well, goodbye.
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Well even Calif gets hit with floods and fire . I still say its better in Spain , or Italy, world domination by US is just ego maniacs .
narcissistic personality disorder , thats United States
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@Elvis Nash@ElvisNash Sí, es verdad Elvis, Spain is different Just like the advertising slogan says to attract tourists!!!
Spain is a stage set for tourism; apparently, old things are very interesting, the older the better. Wine certainly helps, ham Serrano makes you thirsty, so you have to drink more, and so the vicious circle begins, hahaha. No, no, I'm joking. Well, there's some truth to it.
Spain is a very curious country; it has great thinkers, great painters, writers, inventors, (the submarine, for example, the helicopter, a first version)... many other things, the mop, 😎 and me. Olé
PS._ It amuses me to think how other countries see us, dressed in flamenco attire, with castanets, and with bulls parading through the plazas, hahaha. We're such a modern and advanced country that corruption is practically a national issue, hahaha. Don't go thinking we're behind in those things,LOL
Anyway, we're a country of contrasts, but I know there are very good people here, helpful, supportive, and dreamy people. There are still people like that.
Well, I'm going to contact the tourism office to get a commission for the advertising!
Ah! Sé tocar las castañuelas!
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I was thinking of emigrating to spain at some point. nor only for the culture, but the cost of living is less in spain than here in the US
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I don’t see Spain any way really , I just know it has to be better than the US .Any country where kids are killing kids in schools has a big problem .0
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Well, don't think twice! It depends on which city you choose! Northern Spain is great; it has a damp and cold climate in winter, but spring, summer, and autumn are fantastic! And the prices are great too!
Madrid, Barcelona, Seville, Bilbao, are very expensive... but you can eat very well and cheap throughout the country, there is always the right place for your pocket
Hola!!
Mora
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Sí!!!
Again showing my noise here hahaha You all do so many songs in a few time!!! Hola!!!
Mora
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Howdy, Stranger!