Cold Box of Sadness
Words me / Music Suno
https://suno.com/s/M3wriNb4OCYta7J1
Copilot said my life is presently a cold box of sadness :)..
That's a great line, let's make it nonsensical
[Verse 1 - Echo effect]
I felt wrong without you
In my cold box of sadness
Where time is my madness
And I run backwards
[Refrain - Layered Vocals]
I flew to the sun because
To burn in your redness
[Verse 2 - Echo effect]
I feel what I feel missing you
In my cold box of sadness
Where todays endless
My feet presently
[Refrain - Layered Vocals]
I flew to the moon because
To cool in your blueness
[Outro - Echo effect]
I will feel hopeful soon
In my cold box of sadness
Where tomorrow's todays
Watching colored changes
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Moody! I think you missed the link to music there.
The disjointed phrases like: "I flew to the moon because .... To cool in your blueness" throw me a little, but I'm assuming they are meant to. The first verse does talk about madness! And maybe they are being sung by different people in the song. And of course you already mentioned nonsense in the intro.
"Cold box of sadness" is a truly evocative phrase, well worthy of being a title, though an incredibly sad one.
You might consider ending on that, with modification because of the hopeful outro.
I will feel hopeful soon
When tomorrow's today
Where colors change
Beyond my cold box of sadness
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I like your lyrics and the story and feeling you're giving us. Yea, you misssed the link. I'd love to know what it actually sounds like.
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Thanks, here's the link - https://suno.com/s/M3wriNb4OCYta7J1
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Here's the link, https://suno.com/s/M3wriNb4OCYta7J1 if possible add it to my post. that's a good suggestion. I'll ponder it.
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You got the things might turn for the better , sounds good Bill
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Thanks. Elvis. IT's funny how we get inspirations. A comment from an AI bot about my living conditions caused to songs, the other I'll post tomorrow :)..
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Yup you can talk to them all day on things , good companion really . Solutions on problems , whatever it might it might be . it goes on forever , you have to shut it down , it keeps reacting to every scenario you post in there
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they lack feel and emotion, so they can't get upset :)
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Love the music!
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Thanks Owen.
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I disagree , they can understand emotions of humans . But the machine itself ? No they can not feel emotions.
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That was my point. AI's not capable of true emotion, just emulation.
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Correct cuz it wires and fuses
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Yes :). which makes them the perfect companion. they can't get upset if you insult them, because they don't have any feelings, but then they are a learning algorithm, and like humans do well with positive reinforcement, so there's that :)
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They keep improving at emulating humans though. They don't get upset....yet!
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yes, true, but that would still require a certain level of consciousness, which they don't have. It won't be true, "emotion", still only emulated and last only for the session you are in, then be "forgotten" when you close it :)
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love that blues fused with the dance beat. So many applications for something like that. so cool.
i don't mean this as a negative, the lyrics remind of the refrigerator poetry magnets. i used to do something similar, kinda a free flow thought poetry.
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thanks, the best kind of poetry, free flow :).. I'd be interested in reading some. Or better yet, even though this style had been done, set it to music. 😀
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