Yesterdays

bhengen · January 25

Lyrics Me; Music Suno

Not overly profound or abstract, going for symbolism

https://suno.com/s/Hmscz4f58E0I2eus

[Refrain

Yesterdays are tomorrows are todays

[Verse 1]

Yesterdays quickly float by

Stuck in marshmallow skies

Standing on a white beach

Seemingly close, out of reach

[Chorus]

Sitting on a moving dock

In a sea of ticking clocks

I am the onion of pearls

Layers of pastimes unfurl

[Refrain]

Yesterdays are tomorrows are todays

[Verse 2]

I look fondly to tomorrows

The tree's rings rapidly grow

New dawns are fanciful dreams

Reality's not what they seem

[Chorus]

While sitting on a moving dock

In sea of ticking clocks

I am the onion of pearls

Layers of pastimes unfurl

[Outro]

Yet today is still today

Here is here and I'll stay

Past remains where it's at

The future black cat scats

MuskieBait44 · January 26

I like the lyric and melody on the chorus. The 1st chorus and the build up is really cool. I wanted to hear more of that all the way through the second chorus.

Not sure how I feel on the last line and the ending, seems to end abruptly.

over all = 👍️

RainyDayMan · January 26

Definitely rich in symbolism! But I have to disagree with your other comments: plenty of abstract there, and "Yesterdays are tomorrows are todays" feels profound to me!

Very dynamic piece. Felt like it upped the tempo during the song is that right?

Overall, I think that came out well. Not sure I understood it though!