Behind the mind (Remix)
Words Me; music - Suno
This is a remix from a previous song. I like this version better.
https://suno.com/s/6HLytMfnaRNmuCI6
[Verse 1]
You're looking in my mind
I don't want you to find
I don't want you to see
What hides inside me
[Verse 2]
Now you've opened the door
Exposing my rotting core
What creeps in these hallways
Are twisted demons at play
[Verse 3]
My rooms are filled with gloom
One feels like an ancient tomb
Locked and tossed the key
No longer desired memories
[Verse 4]
Face pulled by metal strings
Seized by rusty cogs and springs
Face frozen as a warped smile
From years of constant denial
[Bridge]
My mask conceals what is found
Silent voices of tortured sounds
Mocking me at my very core
Taunting me from behind the door
[Outro]
Now time for you to go,
Nothing more to show
Things that can't be said
Etched deep in my head
I don't want you to see
That my true reality
Is, I'll never be freed
Comments
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Quite a contrast between that soaring angelic voice and the darkness of the lyric!
Tons of ambience and mood in this one. Gives the feel of moody lighting and dark corridors.
And a tight ending.
I think that came out very well.
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Thanks owen.:)
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Pretty spooky song , guess it all comes down to promts on how Suno turns out
Good job Bill
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Thanks Elvis. It actually does. not only in the style box, but in the lyrics as well
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