Etched in Stone
This is an older song, a collab with David Wagner who used to be a member here. He wrote the lyrics and I set it to music. Dave ran it through Suno AI Cover recently to see how it would sound, and it came out pretty well I think.
Music: https://www.reverbnation.com/wagdaddysr/song/35191375-etched-in-stone-3
Etched in Stone
Words/Music, Dave Wagner/Owen Hovenden
Verse 1:
Names with chalk on the sidewalk will soon be washed away.
The written promises on the overpass now painted grey.
But today I was at the cemetery laying a friend to rest.
I noticed a marker that said his dad was the best.
That got me thinking when I've grown and can't be healed
because the Lord has called me home well, I'll still be near.
Chorus:
And have I been the father I needed to be?
And have I taught you to reach farther than you can see?
When you're feeling all alone I hope you'll come to me
Where my name is etched in stone.
Where my name is etched in stone.
Verse 2:
And so my son, when you're skipping stones across the smooth water
realize names on glass once broken are soon forgotten.
And those carved in the bows of trees must someday fall.
And always remember where I am and never doubt.
For I can still see you and hear you when you call.
Come to me, happy or sad because I'm still your dad.
Chorus
Bridge:
And if you wanna feel, like you're not alone
Touch me where my name is etched in stone
Chorus
Comments
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oooo, what a deep premise. I love deep stories and lyrics, this one get's me a lil wet in the eyes...I was gonna get cremated but now I may have to rethink that.
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This makes you want to go pay a visit to not only your dad but grandparents as well, very good write. Thanks for posting it.
Tex
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somber song to wake up to. how do you think it would sound if you dropped the last chorus, changed the bridge to an outro, and repeated the line - Touch me where my name is etched in stone. I think it might have more of an impact. just my thoughts :)
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Yes, it sounds well by Suno, vey cool story, lyrics remind me a lot parts of my song
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XhCysPaEkuU
Minds sometimes are connected in a strange way, does not it?
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I guess Nasia is still around . Well written Owen
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Thanks all for the comments and suggestions!
Going to be played tonight apparently after 9 pm EST, on earsradio.com, so that's cool.
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That's very cool 😎
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