Only you matter
Words - me; music - Suno
Was wondering how it would sound if Syd Barret wrote Time in a bottle 😀
Sorry sid.
Was trying to get pink floyd sound but after 10 attemps, this sounded the best :)
https://suno.com/song/e82152df-c7b6-410a-a2ab-96df9c9fd812?sh=EA5gB1jjvwC0C0Jh
[Verse 1]
Scurrying scarabs, hide in bottles
Jelly belly Kronos, happily devours
Perpetual gobbles, years from days
Wanting all my stuff, flowering ours
[Verse 2]
Spending days, frolicking harmonies
Fishes swim streams, crystalline blue
Treasured dreams, sings butterfly wings
Wanting alldays, everydays with you
[Chorus]
Time slips, drips, melts faces
Tick tock, clock, endless chatter
Globe spins, allworld, rosy visions
Alltime, manytime, only you matter
[Guitar solo]
[Verse 3]
I have wishy box, a pretty box
Empty dreams fully blue trues
Then one day, you leapt into my box
Now filled merrily, sharilly with you
[Verse 4]
The time we spend, it is good
Honey syrupy, beehived trees
Suckling life's nectar, is sweet
Eternal moments, barefoot free
[Chorus]
Time slips, drips, melts faces
Tick tock, clock, endless chatter
Globe spins, allworld, rosy visions
Alltime, manytime, only you matter
Comments
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Standing outside the rabbit hole listening to the music again!
It's a good sound nevertheless.
The other Sid
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Thanks sid.. was listening to the madcap laughs, and thought that would be funny.. not as easy as it sounds :).. Sad story Syd's is.. but you can't do better than Shine on crazy diamond.. but I might try. he has an interesting story
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pretty abstract words , but that's your style with no commercial aspirations . I don't think anyone on this site has commercial aspirations. mostly just word puzzle songs
Sounds good Bill
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@ElvisNash - there is and has been progressive / experimental rock for generations. lyrics more abstract than mine.. look at king crimson, some of steve wilson songs. granted not as popular as mainstream, but there is a very large underground following.. thanks for the comment. :)
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Good luck on promotion to get the views . Suno folks are creating channels. pretty easy to do .
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I like the fast paced sound of it.
The melting faces puts me in mind of Dali.
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@RainyDayMan - Thanks owen. tried to capture the surrealist writing of syd. not as easy I thought :)
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I'm feeling the Congo drums through my speakers. I feel myself working out to this song. High energy.
I'm amazed you can find the right beat with 10 times generated. You're so lucky!
I like your dynamic song styles. You are not predictable. One of a kind.
I look forward to your next song! Great work as always.
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@TammyB - thanks for the comment. that wasn't the beat I was going for.. I did some more prompts after I posted and found this was closer to what I was aiming for - https://suno.com/song/f6a9948c-5ffb-4e03-9d27-0bbdefb56554?sh=VxOLBSYD7OIJGffd
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Nice. I really like the drums. It kind of reminded me a bit of later Queen musically.0
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