Original song: I don't care
This is an interesting piece, in all regards. It's a story. I hope you like it:
https://gloriousmagicalfields.bandcamp.com/track/i-dont-care-2
Lyrics:
In school you read the books
But now you get the dirty looks
And your mother is pounding on your door
And your daddy don't speak to you no more
It's a breakdown
Let's get back to when you were in school
You met some guys and you became really cool
Stayin' out all night
They put out your light
Life is cruel
And now it's
I don't care and I don't care and I don't care and I don't care and I don't care and I don't care and I don't care
In school you read the books
But now you get the dirty looks
And your mother is pounding on your door
And your daddy don't speak to you no more
It's a breakdown
Let's get back to when you were in school
You met some guys and you became really cool
Stayin' out all night
They put out your light
Life is cruel
And now it's
I don't care and I don't care and I don't care and I don't care and I don't care and I don't care and I don't care
Comments
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Oh, that is just brilliant! Liked that a lot. Obviously, still got your sound issues but I know you're on to that.
When you do sort it, run this one through again, it's your best yet, that guitar work, definitely Led Zeppelin.
Not sure, if in this case, repetition is the best form of emphasis, use your strengths, drive up the power curve with your guitar work end screamin' "I don't care", that'll get you noticed!
I loved it,
Sid
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Thanks for listening. I thought some people would probably like it. Better production on the way.
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