Original song - Superstar

robwills

This is an original song I think a lot of people will like:

https://gloriousmagicalfields.bandcamp.com/track/superstar-2

Lyrics:

Sometimes you can't explain

Why you didn't get the fame

That's the way it goes

Sometimes nobody knows

And it's getting so much harder

To believe

And you can't get out of bed for days

You are a superstar

You are a superstar

You say you paid your dues

Now you're singing the blues

There's one thing you ought to know

You should have played more shows

And it's getting much harder to see

Life is better than you know it

Believe

You are a superstar

You are a superstar

Your mother says you're a waste

Yea

But she never had the taste

And you know the feeling of laying on the floor

Thinking you was a big star

And it's getting much harder to breath

And your dreams are lost in the breeze

You are a superstar

You are a superstar

And you were you were there

Where?

No nobody cares

Why it takes so long?

Listen to my song

And it's getting so much harder

To fulfill your needs

And you haven't slept for many days

You are a superstar

RainyDayMan

That's a good one. I think the song itself is all there. It's begging for drums and a full production but I know that's off your agenda in the short term.

Good stuff Rob!

robwills

Thanks for listening.

sidshovel

Listen to RDM Rob, he's got it spot on with the music side.

This is good and with a little work could be very good.

Not being a musician, I tend to focus on the lyrics and construction.

These are both very good indeed, you are on the cusp of a major breakthrough here if that's the direction you want to go.

Thanks for posting Rob, I look forward to your next one.

Sid