The laughter
This song is totally atypical, it is not dedicated to any man or woman, the lyrics are very descriptive, however, at least that's what I think, and it portrays something that we all know.
I made the video thinking of giving a physical and real appearance to what I describe. At the end of the video, when that disappears, silence appears... things change
I know it's a little disconcerting... or not...
As for the arrangement, it's rhythmic but slow and I think the strings wrap the voice well, the guitar gives it a nostalgic touch that I love.
I hope you enjoy it.
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I love how the video is presented as a film in a theater, and we are one of the audience! Really blurring the lines between the viewer and the medium!
For me the song is enjoyable , but I found my attention wandering. There wasn't a specific line or melodic phrase that stood out in my memory after listening to it. One to just drift along with perhaps.
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@MoraAmaroLaLoba The atmosphere of your track is nicely eclectic and very enjoyable as always, Mora. The bass and drums are the pulse of your song and they mix well with the guitar layered on top. At times, I hear a little Middle Eastern influence in the track. Your vocals are great as usual. You sing your lyrics rhythmically in a way that blends well with the music. The lyrics are unusual in an interesting and compelling way that leaves the story open to one's imagination, which in my opinion is the way lyrics should be written. I like the party-crowd-laughter during the outro; a cool touch! 😎
The video's style, set in a theater, was definitely unique. There are lots of interesting things happening in the video, too, and it's obvious you worked hard to create it.
Well done, Mora! I enjoyed your cool song and video! 😀
Cheers,
Joseph
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Very European sounding, just like your other songs. I think you should "tighten" one up and make it a hit. Otherwise these are all pieces for connoisseurs.
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I am inclined to agree with Rob, your eclectic style is likely to appeal to a niche audience only.
To broaden the appeal of your work, you probably need to commercialise the song a little and apply the diverse production techniques that are a hallmark of your presentations.
It really depends on your own artistic goals and expectations which way you choose to go.
Sid
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European sounding? Yeah, I suppose it is. Some of your work is a bit more dynamic, but I like this. And the video..you must put some work into those. Something I've never tried my hand at. Great stuff.
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@RainyDayMan @icystorm @robwills @sidshovel @ChrisPrice
Gracias chicos, I agree with many of you, this song is not a comercial one, I think my songs aren't for big audience hahaha But I loooove to give life to what has not a physical representation, I looove metaphors that describe what is not usual.
However, I also know that from time to time I manage to make a song that many people like and that surprises me first haha
Have a nice day!
Mora
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Your songs are wonderful exactly as you write, sing, and produce them, Mora. All songs are not meant to be commercialized or for big audiences. So feel free to express yourself with your very cool music! 😎😀
Cheers,
Joseph
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hahaha.
Joseph, You made my day! you are really generous, sure your family and friends love you a lot!!!
Thank you so much for your support. Autumn flowers, that's how I'll define your comments. @icystorm
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