The Ghost

MoraAmaroLaLoba

I love Halloween because it makes us children and children are the ones who can see the ghosts.

It's not a sad song, it's just dark but it's also a proclamation of a ghost ahahha

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AznnLQavYRg

I am the ghost that lives 

under the shadow

of a tree 

with no name

with no name

I am the ghost that lives 

over the flowers

lying 

on old graves 

with no name 

with no name

 

I can inspire 

the whispers of

furtive creatures

under the light 

on the other side of mine

the dreams of the shadows 

wonderfing by my seas

I am my ghost

but I am fine

I am not cold or hot

and I can fly when I walk

Nothing to loose

nothing left to feel

I am not cold or hot

and I can fly

when I walk

I am my ghost

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@MoraAmaroLaLoba Your new song, I am my Ghost, is a masterful fusion of cinematic style in the intro that morphs seamlessly into Euro-synth-pop throughout the verses, chorus, and middle section. The song's atmosphere is suspenseful, eerie, mysterious, and spooky—a perfect Halloween vibe! Your accented vocals fit the style beautifully, as always.

I love the echo effect when you sing "I am my ghost" and the soft "huh-uh-uh" inhalations under your breath; a nice touch! Your lyrics are savvy and fitting throughout, but these lines are the best, in my opinion:

I can inspire 
the whispers of
furtive creatures
under the light 
on the other side of mine

Your song is well produced and the mix is crystal clear. Your video is also imaginative, inventive, and fits the season! i enjoyed your song and video. Great work on your new Halloween creation, Mora! I look forward to hearing and seeing what you create next. 😀

Cheers,

Joseph

sidshovel

I enjoyed this one Mora, really evocative and definitely haunting in both the music and the words.

Thank you

Sid

MoraAmaroLaLoba

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Hola Joseph!! Buenos días! thank you so much, really appreciated. Take care @icystorm

MoraAmaroLaLoba

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Hola @sidshovel Muchas gracias!!

ChrisPrice

Wow, this had me on the edge of my seat! Very haunting. Just in time for Halloween and another very cool song Mora.😀

MoraAmaroLaLoba

Hola Chris!!! Gracias, yes Halloween is coming soon!!! I would like to put on a sheet with 2 holes for eyes 😎 But that's a thing for kids, who are allowed to do all kinds of nonsense outside of Halloween... but for the adults... they would think I'm crazy!! Although maybe it's an honor lol

Cuídate!!! @ChrisPrice

RainyDayMan

Very atmospheric and moody! Strong match between the vocal melody and the music.

And the video is a joy to watch as always!

Well done.

MoraAmaroLaLoba

Hola, buenos días desde mi país!!! Thank you, glad to see you!!!! @RainyDayMan

MoraAmaroLaLoba

Hola @NickRyder

I used to give poetry recitals accompanied by a string quartet (my little daughter was one of them, but due to circumstances that are not relevant here I had to leave that path and fell into a depression, becoming an agoraphobic person. Little by little I have managed to go outside, although I soon need to return home.

Marcus has been, and continues to be, my great support and following his advice I began to make songs with my poems as well as videos. Thanks to this activity I have reached to be a "normal" person, although my health is still very particular...

A friend of ours, director of the AIE in Spain, scolds me a lot and says that I have to put my work in order and publish it for commercialization... At the moment I have many songs already prepared, you already know some of them, I need to take the last step to do so.

Thank you for your words. Much appreciated