If
This short word contains so many things that did not happen... so many doubts, looks at the past, at the self in that moment of doubt...
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8VC3G6t9IYM
if if
what a small word to describe the well of doubts
if if
maybe its a wish
an option
a gesture
a lighting ripping the sky
of a landscape
that does not exist
a regret
a memory of hidden things
of bad decisions
of many questions
of of if if of of if if
a door to the void
when pronounced
in your silenc
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Yes if. . .
I carry quite a few ifs.
I enjoyed the lyrics and how it forces the question if, front and center. No elliquence or colorful dressing, just IF.
The music is a good foundation for Thule lyrics but I think they need to be clearer as I found it difficult to follow some parts.
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Another entrancing song from you, Mora. Like prysmatyk said, the word "if" takes center stage here. I definitely relate to these lyrics, as I'm sure most of us do. The music and lyrics have a dark, hypnotic quality and capture the feelings of regret and melancholy. You are so good at these expriemental / avant garde type songs and I continue to be impressed by them 🙂
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That is absolutely brilliant, what a wonderful piece. That just blew me away!
The whole song was hypnotic, together with a fantastc video, kudos to whoever made it.
Unique and outstanding, highly recommended for a wonderful experience.
Thank you so much for sharing.
Sid
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Each of your song+videos is a piece of art Mora!
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So unique, beautifully different, such an intriguing voice. And yeah how do you do those mind blowing videos??
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@MoraAmaroLaLoba The song and video are organic art as always, Mora! Both are real on all levels. The music is authentic and resonates with the human spirit. The lyrics are genuine and penned by a human mind that reaches human souls. Your accented vocals are unique and always instantly recognizable. The music, lyrics, vocals, and video imagery meld together nicely to create another winning song and video! Great work! I enjoyed listening. 😀
My favorite lines are:
a regret a memory of hidden things of bad decisions of many questions
If, if... If, if, if! 😀
Cheers,
Joseph
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I like this song, not for its music but for its meaning to me... But I noticed that there is something lame in an instrumental interlude between two parts. I have found what it is but the song will remain that way. The important thing is that when something does not take my hand to dance its rhythm in my work I manage to mentally fix it hahaha and I love that because I move forward.
Thanks for your observation, although maybe you are referring to the whole track hahaha and I am referring to a part of it.
See you!
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Hola, gracias @@BeatlesFan64 Much appreciated. I am glad to be back, there are very good songs in the forum, I'll learn a lot!!!
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Hola Sid, sure many of us feel same at some moments, if... what a small, short, word!!! Thank you so much, nice words make people feel good always. Deep down we are like children showing our drawing, @sidshovel
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Do you know? I am not sure if I told you this before but I was a painter since I was a very little girl... My problems with vision made me left this passion but... Magic exists! To make videos is like to paint for me but also adding movement... My videos are plenty of errors but I think that, as a whole, they have a special light, something I always look for, and a clearly abstract story, like life, that for me is painting.
Glad to see you well @RainyDayMan
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Thank you for liking my voice sounding smoke and my vids! I do them in Adobe Premiere Pro, many times I use too Quick Time Player or After Effects, but Adobe Premiere is my favorite, intuitive, easy to manage. I am my own actress, footage and a lot of things hahaha
See you! @StoneFlowers
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Gracias Joseph, You are one of the few who like my accent, I don't think even my children do hahaha
I really appreciate it @icystorm
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