I will endure
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lyrics SS music/vocals Ai
[intro]
[verse 1]
You let me in, baby, into those arms,
let me feel all of your charms.
Ain't ever gonna let you go, go now,
find me a way now, baby never let you go.
[verse 2]
I need you to stay baby, here with me,
together, is where we'll be.
Don't never, no ever, leave, leave me,
listen to my plea, now baby don't you go.
[chorus]
Oh baby, gonna come thru,
nothin'll stop me, stop me bein' with you.
Oh, I'm gonna be there, it'll come true,
I'll endure baby, cos I'm comin' home to you
[verse 3]
Been a long time, baby I've been away,
countin' down, every single day.
Till I'll be back, back in those arms
feel that softness baby, I feel it now.
[chorus]
Oh baby, gonna come thru,
nothin'll stop me, stop me bein' with you.
Oh, I'm gonna be there, it'll come true,
I'll endure baby, cos I'm comin' home to you
[bridge]
Turnin' on your street, baby nothin' changed,
stoppin' at the house, now somethin's strange.
Car's outside, but you don't drive,
the weight of the world, baby done fell on me.
[chorus]
Oh baby, gonna come thru,
nothin'll stop me, stop me bein' with you.
Oh, I'm gonna be there, it'll come true,
I'll endure baby, cos I'm comin' home to you
[outro]
Oh, I'm gonna be there, it'll come true,
I'll endure baby, cos I'm comin' home to you
Comments
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I'm guessing this was explicitly written to be a motown sound, and it works really well as such.
Suno has a done a very good job with it too, it all fits together very sweetly.
There's nothing for me to crit here, it's a strong song that just works.
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You're spot on as usual, the lyrics are a 10 minute throwaway, a generic compilation designed to "feed the machine". The goal, in this case, was the "sound", but then you already figured that out, didn't you!
Motown, I grew up on, 4 Tops/Isley Bro's. More specifically, I was aiming for a Holland-Dozier-Holland/Orchestral with a touch of Mark Knopfler thrown in at the end. That took four days and hundreds of credits!
Now, that I have the sound I'm looking for, I'll write some songs to fit. Ultimately, I want to do a song along the lines of Bernadette by the 4 Tops. Technically, this is much more of a challenge given the complexities of the song and the limitations of the Ai controls in Suno/Udio. Keep you posted.
Sid
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Hey Sid, well, Motown is one of those genres that will always find a way to put smile on my face, and you definitely managed to nail that sound here. If this is really an AI voice, it's really impressive. And of course, the rest of the instrumentation is spot on. Those grand, sweeping strings really pull it all together. I look forward to seeing what else you come up with down the road.
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The vocal sounds like David Ruffin to me. One the best. He influenced a lot of late 60's/early 70's rock singers. Steve Marriott, Rod Stewart (when he was a proper front man), Paul Rodgers and all the rest. In a way it's so sad to hear it done with Ai, but it works.. so well done Sid... I guess.😪
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