Candlestick Lyrics

Kayla813

<1st verse>
Sit alone and wonder
What to do with my future?
I gave you my life
You threw it in a blender
Letting the wrong ppl call the shots
What a fucking splender

<chorus>
You blew out a candle that was lit
I gave you my heart
But you didn't know what to do with it
I wonder why I feel like such shit
I'll try not to take a fit and sit
Pissed on a candle that was
Always suppost to be lit

<2nd verse>
Again,
You never let me in
All the wrong people
Continue to win
I wonder why the hell
my head spins
I tore down my walls
I have to put them up again

<chorus>
You blew out a candle that was lit
I gave you my heart
But you didn't know what to do with it
I wonder why I feel like such shit
I'll try not to take a fit and sit
Pissed on a candle that was
Always suppost to be lit

<bridge>
Reach out to you,
No1s there,
I dont know why,
I even care

<chorus>
You blew out a candle that was lit
I gave you my heart
But you didn't know what to do with it
I wonder why I feel like such shit
I'll try not to take a fit and sit
Pissed on a candle that was
Always suppost to be lit

<closing>
Tore down my walls
Just to put them up again,
And I'll ever really did,
Was love you my friend

RainyDayMan

This one is pushing the boundaries of acceptable language for TSF. I can see that it's in context and appropriate for the song, but if you want to write similar songs in future, it may be better to post them on other sites.

That said, I think you've used the candlestick metaphor well here, and captured a lot of emotion.

Has a good structure and flow to it.

ChrisPrice

I was just about to review this, then I read what RDM said. I don't think the use of swear words adds anything to what is otherwise a strong lyric. Just my opinion, but Owen feels strongly about what's acceptable on the forum, and I agree with that.

I really like your words apart from this. They could be used to make a really powerful song.😀