Love the boy
Intro
He jokes around and teases me,
My brother gets annoyed.
I hang around them too much
I think I love the boy.
Verse
I’m not the girl he used to know.
My pony tail is gone.
Just the other day he asked me
What perfume I had on.
He spends less time with my brother
And more time teasing me.
I lie awake in bed at night
I think of him and dream.
Chorus
I want so to kiss him.
Just seeing him brings joy.
I think oh hell I know I
I know I love the boy.
Verse
My brother wasn’t home one day
By chance he happened by;
Asked me if I’d be interested
In going for a ride.
He said, go get your bathing suit
We’ll go to Myer’s lake.
I had a hunch but wasn’t sure
Just what approach he’d take.
Chorus
I want so to kiss him.
Just seeing him brings joy.
I think oh hell I know I
I know I love the boy.
Verse
I could tell that he was nervous.
We’d never been alone.
Teasing me like a big brother
Had made him feel at home.
I had a case of butterflies.
This was a dream come true.
He pulled me close and kissed me
And told me I love you.
Tag
I think oh hell I know I
I know I love the boy.
Comments
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Another understated but excellent offering.
Planning on putting Ai to this Carroll?
Upbeat teenie thing?
Sorry haven't got a clue what the genre name is!
Sid
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my freebies are up for awhile.lol0
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Can certainly imagine this in an Avril Lavigne / skater girl type vibe!
I particularly like how the "I know" is used at the start and end of these two lines:
I think oh hell I know I
I know I love the boy.
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thanks!0
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Song included0
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That Ai opted for the Iris DeMent soundalike was a really good choice, the execution less so!
The lyrics deserve a more polished version but still with the DeMent voice.
I get more and more frustrated with Ai not enabling finer tuning of the output.
Iris would do herself a favour if someone picked this up for her, it's right down her street.
Love the song deserves to be a hit.
Sid
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yeah wish I had more control. Once you get past the first segment you can’t remix the rest of the segments.0
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Gone back to using Suno, right now, more reliable and programmable, at least until Udio sorts itself out.
This race between Udio and Suno for IPO isn't doing anyone any favours!
Sid
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