when I was 24

dickardson

I need this as an opening that’s comical & relaxes the mood. Please let me know what you think.

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I almost died. I’m a different person now…but I know it can be funny! I just need help getting your point of view.

RainyDayMan

I have removed your post, as I don't think it falls within our guidelines.

https://www.thesongwritersforum.com/vanilla/discussion/8/posting-a-song#latest

This is not a comment on it's quality, only for it's suitably for posting here on TSF. We aim for a family friendly environment, that you'd be happy recommending for your kids.

There are many other songwriting sites, however, where the rules are more relaxed and may be a better fit for your works. Hope you find the feedback you are looking for.

dickardson

Where would I post something like this successfully? I didn’t realize it was for family! Sorry! Even if there isn’t a place here to post it on this site, do you recommend any places I could post it?

Sorry once again!!!!

RainyDayMan

Here is a post on "the top 10 songwriting forums in 2024" that may be helpful.

https://forums.feedspot.com/songwriting_forums/