The day the music changed

carroll

The day the music changed
verse
I was September, she was November.
She was a decade older than me.
but it mattered not, I loved her a lot.
And she was crazy about me.
chorus
Love doesn’t care what people say.
We were two hearts in tune.
Till the day that the music changed.
The day the music changed.
verse
I can remember, I can remember
people telling me she was too old.
She was amazing, our hearts were blazing.
but a flame’s impossible to hold.
chorus
Love doesn’t care what people say.
We were two hearts in tune.
Till the day that the music changed.
The day the music changed.
bridge
I hadn’t seen the movies she’d seen.
I hadn’t read the books she’d read.
The loving was great but we were strangers.
Outside of that big feather bed.
verse
I was September, she was November.
She was a decade older than me.
But it mattered not, I loved her a lot.
and she was crazy about me.
chorus
Love doesn’t care what people say.
We were two hearts in tune
Till the day that the music changed.
The day the music changed.

sidshovel

Reading your songs is like watching a really good tv series. You can't wait for the next episode.

They vary in content, structure and emotion but maintain such a high standard each one.

Keep them coming, enjoying this ride.

Sid

carroll

Thanks. Try to stay out of the rut or find new ways to say things.

RainyDayMan

Nice! Reads very smoothly.

Some good lines there like: "but a flame’s impossible to hold."

and you sum it all up in the bridge with:

The loving was great but we were strangers.

Outside of that big feather bed.

Nicely done.

carroll

Thanks